rate_review Reviews

You can't leave it here! I've really enjoyed this story. I just came upon it a few days ago, and I have not been able to stop reading it [unless nessecary]. And to be stopped at such a cliff hanger does really make everybody want you to update. You know you want to! Well, after trying to motivate you to update, I'd like to also comment on your writing style. It's so hard to find good work on some of the fanfiction sites around here, even some of the great ones like Adultfanfiction.net, fanfiction.net, and mediaminer even have stories that have no plot and are hard to follow. But the vocabulary and language that's used in this one is really a hands down kudos for you. Very much so. Well, I'll be looking for an update. You've got me hooked. I'm a big Sess/Kag fan, and this is so much better than her mating with him and saying, "Okay, I'll leave my friends that I've known for so long just for this one moment!" And it shows a reality check for the storyline. Kudos. Thanks for reading the review!

~Tsuyoku~

Update now? Holiday gift!! ~_^

What's up! I'm dying to know what gonna happen next. Pls post new chappie soon.

I LOVE YOUR STORY. LOVE DOESN'T EVEN BEGIN TO DESCRIBE IT!!! IT IS AMAZING BY FAR THE BEST I'VE READ SO FAR. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I WOULD GREATLY APPRECIATE IT IF YOU WOULD EMAIL ME WHEN YOU'VE UPDATED THIS STORY. PLEASE. IF IT ISN'T TOO MUCH TROUBLE OF COURSE. THANKS KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hi! I love your story and how you seem to have remained true to the characters personalities! I can't wait until you update next! Of all the stories I have read on here this one has been by far the best. Keep up the awesome work and please email me when you add the next chapter!

Thanks for the wonderful reading!
Christina

Oh, please update. I'm enjoying this greatly. By the way, where are you from? As weird as this sounds I'm detecting an accent in your writing. I can't quite place it, but it sure isn't from Cleveland. Just a little curious, you don't really have to answer. I just wanted to say that I'm enjoying the plot and I love how you're doing Miroku. I think Koga was pretty on the mark too. It's just like Kagome to find a new and interesting way to torture herself. Quite possibly one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time. Keep going and know that there are plenty of people who love your work.

This was a great installment. I am, however, surprised that you have not published yet. You are the type of storyteller we search through the bookstores and the internet to find. You grab us with a strangle-hold and don't let us go. At least not until YOU say so. Intricate storyline and great attention to detail make waiting for your chapters and other stories almost unbearable. I can't wait for more, but no pressure from me. Take your time and enjoy the process as much as we do.

Hey, love to be on your mailing list, the adress is dragonspite012@yahoo.com OR dragonspite@sbcglobal.net. Either one should work, but I don't want to be left out of your mailing list! Can't wait until the next one!

I love this story! I really wish you updated more often, this story is so amazing and cool! Please update as soon as possible!