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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's always great seeing an update from you. Life can make it hard to get writing done.
As soon as Kagome was throwing up at the sight of food I figured she was pregnant. The one thing I couldn't help think on is the actual baby the poison Kagome breathed. Did it have an affect on the baby? Or was Sesshomaru's demon power helping him/her out? It's not terribly important but something that popped into my mind while reading.
I enjoyed seeing Miroku helping Kagome out, always by her side. Of course, he's concerned about Sesshomaru getting revenge if anything were to happen to her, but I think his presence helped her through everything. He can accept just about anything with little judgement (or keeping it to himself) and that really came through in this chapter.
You also did a good job capturing Kagome's fear about being pregnant - the fact that she's a 15 year old girl who has to tell her mother. I'm glad she isn't just happy about the baby, but fearful.
Like always, I look forward to your next update. Don't let school stress you out too much (before you know it, it'll be over!).
- LtSonya
As soon as Kagome was throwing up at the sight of food I figured she was pregnant. The one thing I couldn't help think on is the actual baby the poison Kagome breathed. Did it have an affect on the baby? Or was Sesshomaru's demon power helping him/her out? It's not terribly important but something that popped into my mind while reading.
I enjoyed seeing Miroku helping Kagome out, always by her side. Of course, he's concerned about Sesshomaru getting revenge if anything were to happen to her, but I think his presence helped her through everything. He can accept just about anything with little judgement (or keeping it to himself) and that really came through in this chapter.
You also did a good job capturing Kagome's fear about being pregnant - the fact that she's a 15 year old girl who has to tell her mother. I'm glad she isn't just happy about the baby, but fearful.
Like always, I look forward to your next update. Don't let school stress you out too much (before you know it, it'll be over!).
- LtSonya
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my god!!!! You are killing me. Please oh please tell me you won't make us wait forever. You don't even have to make it a long chapy. Well, it would be nice.....and I would be forever greatful. I guess I have no choice but to suck it up and wait. Well.....I guess it is apparent that I like your story. Keep up the good work and good luck on your school tests. I hope you get all 100s so then you will UPDATE YOUR STORY! Forgive me...I an throwing a tantrum. Take care and I will review ya later!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU GET A CHANCE!!!!!!!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*eyes widen* Wow. And you're going to tie it all up in one chapter? Well, I'm sure you'll do it justice. I must say, I'm interested in what Sess's reaction will be to her pregnancy. Though he's a bright boy, I'm sure he's been expecting it. Eagerly awaiting the last chater, but don't worry, I can be paitent.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO! Please don't make us wait, I so enjoy this story! Hell, i'll do your home work....pleaseeee just update!!!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, im still crying!!! But of course, you know i love it. Goodness, i am on the end of my seat thinking of all of the reactions that everyone will have. They are all playing out in my head. >.< tehehe. Good Job sweetie, and im glad your computer is virus free now!!!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally, chapter thirteen has come! ^_^
I was actually surprised when I read the events of chapter thirteen, but then again, I knew that I shouldn't have been. Anyway, I'm dying to know what happens next; I'm writhing in pain here! Well, no, I'm not, but I might as well be? Haha. ^^() Again, your characterizations and descriptions are very powerful and evocative. I feel squeamish alongside Kagome. I'm hoping that everything will turn out alright. Thank you for this wonderful new installment, and I hope to read the next chapter soon. ^_^ Good luck with your work, and ja! ^_^
Mizu-chan
I was actually surprised when I read the events of chapter thirteen, but then again, I knew that I shouldn't have been. Anyway, I'm dying to know what happens next; I'm writhing in pain here! Well, no, I'm not, but I might as well be? Haha. ^^() Again, your characterizations and descriptions are very powerful and evocative. I feel squeamish alongside Kagome. I'm hoping that everything will turn out alright. Thank you for this wonderful new installment, and I hope to read the next chapter soon. ^_^ Good luck with your work, and ja! ^_^
Mizu-chan
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad Kagome's pregnant! I guess that means she's going to go to Sesshomaru that much faster. I think it's definitely time she told the others. I think Sango will be more accepting than Kagome thinks, especially with Miroku there. Inuyasha, on the other hand, I'm sure will go completely ballistic. Anyways, I can't wait until the confrontation. And Kagome's decision. Since she is pregnant, that decision shouldn't be that hard to make for her.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good one jajajajjajaja she have to tell Inuysha now she can continue chasing shikon shards that way, it's risky.
update soon
ja
update soon
ja
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FREAKIN COW!!!! that was good, and university is crazy! sometimes i wish i could just sit down and write for the rest of my life. anyway yeah. i love this story, so well done!the conceot is great and the execution of it even better! Oy! i can;t wait for the next chapter, but i will.
Diana
Diana