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for Passion

by CiraArana

person Sarah
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey wow what a great story keep it going! I'm ganna say this when you can please update. But remeber school first!.... When ya not to busy though ...great story!
person Anon
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! your story is really good, I can't wait until you update, the way you portray all the charaters is dead on, Kagome has to go to Sesshoumaru now right? update soon, I will be waiting
person Inuyoukai8
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I love this story! Please update soon!
person Jeni
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is hiddeninnocence96@yahoo.com, i emailed you before, remember?? i was sooooo excited to read your story. she's pregnant!!! ahahaha. you are so evil but i love that you did that!! please review quick, cause i think im going to die of waiting, i almost did you know while you were gone. anyways, good luck on updating quickly, hope you don't get another virus soon (that sucks)
^___^
person Demon slayer Kai
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Umm...Ugh the only thing that i absolutely CANNOT stand is that Kagome's fifteen...I didn't know that...it really bothers me. But other than that, great chapter! I love that you write such long and detailed ones. PLEASE PLEASE write the next one sooner, faster than you wrote this one. Update soon!
person ivorycoral
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wah-HOOOO! You updated! Life as we know it is wonderful! I still really like how this story is progressing. I think, as a reader, I kinda figured at some point Kagome would become pregnant, but the way you brought it into the grand scheme of things worked out really well, and doesn't make things so cliche as they might have otherwse been. Keep up the awesome writing, I wanna know what Sesshoumaru's reaction is going to be when he finds out about this *Grin*!
Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses.
ivorycoral
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I think this chapter was longer than my entire story... Great setup for next chaper. Really looking forward to the Chernobyl that I suspect awaits us devoted readers when Inuyasha finds out...
person AMBER
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story hope u update soon
person Jazz
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please please please pease update soon, AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Denara
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Luv the chapter..... Poor Kagome she has no idea what is wrong with her and Inuyasha doesan't know whats wrong with her... BUt awesome chapter... For me onward to the next one...XD