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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
want more need more update soon
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i knew it. i knew it. i mean all of the signs were there, even though she did breath in the posion. but i have a question. when she puts the cream on to cover her forhead, it can still be wiped off when a wet cloth wipes it right??? wouldnt they have seen it.
i really loved it.. i wish i could write this good. i look forward to reading more. please update soon. i am dieing to find out what happens next.
good luck
may kami-sama be with you
i really loved it.. i wish i could write this good. i look forward to reading more. please update soon. i am dieing to find out what happens next.
good luck
may kami-sama be with you
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so unbelievably awesome!!! I love it so much, please update asap
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, i really love your fanfic Passion, and i hope you update soon, i'd like to see how far this fic will go and see if Fluffy-sama is happy with the idea that he has a hanyou for a pup. i'm sure he will be though because he seems to really cherish Kagome. well, keep up the good work and please update soon.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can you let me know when you have done the rest thanks
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON IM DIEING TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
It´s not so long back I reviewed for Diary, a story from you posted on fanfiction. There I wrote I couldn´t write about the fics which are posted here. Now I can and I have a good reaspn to do so. I love Passion. How you write is is great. I still have to read the last two chapters, however there will be no roblem, because I enjoy the fanfic too much to stop. The first meeting from Sess and Kag, wow, that was going fast, but not wonder, he is a gorgeous and besides he was rather sudecive, there was no way she could have resisted him. Then when he called for her it was cleare it was not a one night stand for him, neither for her. I don´t like stories where she is used only for a distraction. She is way too emotional to be happy afterwards and she simply does not behave so. Here, Sess shows more interests in her then only sex. I think and I hope I understood it well, that he loves her. Besides the lemons, wow (OK, I have to take a deep breath to calm down and dispell the blush I feel creeping upon my face). I enjoyed them. It is amazing the others didn´t found out. It was Kouga who had a suspition. The explanation why it was so made by you was a good idea. What made me a little sad was, that Sess abandoned her. Why in the hell let he his mate go with Inuyasha, what if something happens to her. It was not the first time Inu failed in his promise to protect her. (SIGH) Men I swear their pride is getting in the way all the time. What I read from the last chapter kag is pregnant. Great I am happy about this. I don´t know what you plan for her, but let her be happy. I think ones Sess find out she is pregnant he won´t let her go. If he finds out, but I don´t think she would hide this from him, she accepeted to became his mate, so there is no need for her to hide the information, unless she will continue in her task, but this would bring her unborn pup in danger and I don´t think she would do so, HUH? Sorry, I am definitly twaddling too much for comfort. May it be as it is, I like the fic and the way you write it. Please continue. Take as much time as you need. I visit a university and I am writing my own fic as well. I understand fully what it means to have no time for writing. So I am glad you wrote you have a lot to do for your uni and won´t update soon. It´s ok. That´s very kind from you because your reader know why you stoped writing for some time. My story is going slowly, because I as well have exams and so on to work at.
What to write else, ah, thank you for your answer to my last review for Diary. It cheered me up a lot.
Now to DRAGONS pray. This is an exception from what I wrote previous. Here Kag needed help and Sess offered her his services (my mouth hung open) and she accepted, besides it was her who asked if nothing more. The lemon you put there with the two. I can´t write down a word about it and remember, because I would be embaressed for the blushing what would certainly follow and won´t go unnoticed by the people whicha are it the room. It was so gentle what he had done to her. The way he made it joyful for the girl. He said to her otherwise she would not enjoy it and that he only started. Then the idea with cutting through her barrier instead breaking it. I think that was the first time I saw something like that in a fanfic and I found it good, because so she had more joy from their sex, her fright it would hurt gone the second he entered her. What was amazing was how he lost control and the next morning. He liked it to have her near and his body and perhaps youkai found herenticing, HUH?
The lemon with Sango and Miroku was nice as well, but the three chapter lemon with Kag and Sess, fuh, that was a great work. A lot of emotions put in it, feelings, simple gorgeous.
I was glad when I read you were about to write a sequel to it. I think it was Devine concubine. I am curious what will happen there. A friend to me wrote, that you won´t start in the near future, because you have enough to do with The diary and Passion, however I will wait and will be very enxited when you start posting it. I also like you will first finish what you started. Many nice stories are withound end and where not updated for so long. What a shame the authors stopped them. The stories you are writing, it would be a shame as well if you stopped, because the are too good to be stopped. (I hope I used the correct words and wrote what I meant, if not it should be prizeful and I am sorry if I wrote it the uncorrect way)
I have to go, my next lessons start soon. Take care and untiol later
Angelfighter (Linda)
It´s not so long back I reviewed for Diary, a story from you posted on fanfiction. There I wrote I couldn´t write about the fics which are posted here. Now I can and I have a good reaspn to do so. I love Passion. How you write is is great. I still have to read the last two chapters, however there will be no roblem, because I enjoy the fanfic too much to stop. The first meeting from Sess and Kag, wow, that was going fast, but not wonder, he is a gorgeous and besides he was rather sudecive, there was no way she could have resisted him. Then when he called for her it was cleare it was not a one night stand for him, neither for her. I don´t like stories where she is used only for a distraction. She is way too emotional to be happy afterwards and she simply does not behave so. Here, Sess shows more interests in her then only sex. I think and I hope I understood it well, that he loves her. Besides the lemons, wow (OK, I have to take a deep breath to calm down and dispell the blush I feel creeping upon my face). I enjoyed them. It is amazing the others didn´t found out. It was Kouga who had a suspition. The explanation why it was so made by you was a good idea. What made me a little sad was, that Sess abandoned her. Why in the hell let he his mate go with Inuyasha, what if something happens to her. It was not the first time Inu failed in his promise to protect her. (SIGH) Men I swear their pride is getting in the way all the time. What I read from the last chapter kag is pregnant. Great I am happy about this. I don´t know what you plan for her, but let her be happy. I think ones Sess find out she is pregnant he won´t let her go. If he finds out, but I don´t think she would hide this from him, she accepeted to became his mate, so there is no need for her to hide the information, unless she will continue in her task, but this would bring her unborn pup in danger and I don´t think she would do so, HUH? Sorry, I am definitly twaddling too much for comfort. May it be as it is, I like the fic and the way you write it. Please continue. Take as much time as you need. I visit a university and I am writing my own fic as well. I understand fully what it means to have no time for writing. So I am glad you wrote you have a lot to do for your uni and won´t update soon. It´s ok. That´s very kind from you because your reader know why you stoped writing for some time. My story is going slowly, because I as well have exams and so on to work at.
What to write else, ah, thank you for your answer to my last review for Diary. It cheered me up a lot.
Now to DRAGONS pray. This is an exception from what I wrote previous. Here Kag needed help and Sess offered her his services (my mouth hung open) and she accepted, besides it was her who asked if nothing more. The lemon you put there with the two. I can´t write down a word about it and remember, because I would be embaressed for the blushing what would certainly follow and won´t go unnoticed by the people whicha are it the room. It was so gentle what he had done to her. The way he made it joyful for the girl. He said to her otherwise she would not enjoy it and that he only started. Then the idea with cutting through her barrier instead breaking it. I think that was the first time I saw something like that in a fanfic and I found it good, because so she had more joy from their sex, her fright it would hurt gone the second he entered her. What was amazing was how he lost control and the next morning. He liked it to have her near and his body and perhaps youkai found herenticing, HUH?
The lemon with Sango and Miroku was nice as well, but the three chapter lemon with Kag and Sess, fuh, that was a great work. A lot of emotions put in it, feelings, simple gorgeous.
I was glad when I read you were about to write a sequel to it. I think it was Devine concubine. I am curious what will happen there. A friend to me wrote, that you won´t start in the near future, because you have enough to do with The diary and Passion, however I will wait and will be very enxited when you start posting it. I also like you will first finish what you started. Many nice stories are withound end and where not updated for so long. What a shame the authors stopped them. The stories you are writing, it would be a shame as well if you stopped, because the are too good to be stopped. (I hope I used the correct words and wrote what I meant, if not it should be prizeful and I am sorry if I wrote it the uncorrect way)
I have to go, my next lessons start soon. Take care and untiol later
Angelfighter (Linda)
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ONG!!! Onegai, ONEGAI!!! Update soon. I seriously need to know what is to happen next. I just want Kagome to be selfish this one time and just go to Sesshoumaru, tell him that she is pregnant, and let him know that she still plans to help out her friends in completeing the shikon and defeating Naraku.
Onegai, update soon.
Ciao
Onegai, update soon.
Ciao
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GRRREAT CHAPTER!!! SO CAPTIVATING!!!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic so far ^_^ keep it up! I want more!!!