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for You Darkness...

by Vyncent

person Deep Serenity
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, now(chap 3) this is getting interesting, everyone coming over to this side....ohhhhh can't wait.
person Mija
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh I loved this chap...hehe...the bastid is finally going to get the proper justice he deserves for his crime...oooh please please let us read the details of the things going on in his head as he is forced or subdued or whatever to have sex with this lion lord, I want to know if he starts to figure out how awfull it must of been for the girls HE put threw that or is it why me? why me? thingy he thinks about??? ooh I cant wait update soon till then be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person bettychan
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter for this excellent story. I was wondering exactly what the spell would do to that lowlife. Now I know. I can't wait for the next chapters. It'll be great to see that scumbag get his. Thanks for writing this.
person deep serenity
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well(chap10) very very interesting, what happened to Sess? and what will this mean for a future with Kagome and Inu?

And can't wait for the potion to be put on those bastards. Very good story and I appreciate the way you have handled this issue with using it as you must for your story, very good job
person Jenny
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I came upon your story by accident but have not regretted any of the chapters that I have read so far and know that I will not regret the future ones. I commend you on your beautifully written story. I say this is one of the best stories I have read thus far. I was so interested on what the western lord was going to do to the leader of that stupid gang and I AM EXTREMELY IMPRESSED WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN FOR THE PUNISHMENT OF THE LEADER AND AM ALSO VERY HAPPY. IT FITS TO EVERY DEGREE POSSIBLE AND IMPOSSIBLE. Will kagome be told of this and will the southern lord ever find out that she is a HE? Also will you write about the first night the southern lord will have with his new toy? I CERTAINLY HOPE YOU DO BECAUSE I AM VERY INTERESTED IN WHAT YOU WILL WRITE AND WANT TO READ THE PUNISHMENT FINALLY COMPLETELY FINISIHED IN A WAY IF YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I'M SAYING. ::wink::
I'm a big fan of your stories which are all written extremely well.

Simply put THANK YOU!!!
person Jasmine Fields
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're evil....very much so, but ya' know --- I still LOVE this fic!
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too good. You truly cannot make us wait for the next chapter. I can't wait to see how much pain the lion demon can inflict on his new toy. Paybacks a bitch and this rapist deserves everything he gets. So you go for it and don't hold back. You've given your warnings to the readers of what to expect. Now it time to give the readers, who have eagerly and faithfully stuck with you and your fic, what we want. PAYBACK BABY!!!!!!
person Bianca
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is the best of the best. My goodness I fell in love with it. I mean its explained perfectly and theres not faults in it. I felt so sorry for Kagome. No woman or child should be put through so much pain as Kagome was in this story. But the good thing is that she has friends and family to help her through the hard time. I'm also very happy, more lie overjoyed that Kagome and Iuyasha are mates. But I have a question about the series. I'm asking you this because you sound like you know a lot about the series. At least more then I do. In the series and stuff is there really like mating or is that just invented for the couples to get together. I really want to know because a lot of stories that I've read mention that. I hope you update soon because I want to know what the Lord of the Southern Lands does to the bastard that hurt Kagome and all the other girls. Well update soon because the story is too great to stop. Ja ne for now!!!^_^
person Leiko
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good fic but to me InuYasha, Kouga, and Shippou seem a little ooc.
person essie
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg I want to know what changes happen please update soon