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for You Darkness...

by Vyncent

person psyco_chick32
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This just keeps getting better and better... did Sesshy say that soon the well would be closed??? Kagome would never want to go back, would she? Especially after asking Inuyasha to take her "home"... Wow, I absolutely CANNOT wait for more updates!!
person justme
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!!! That is a viscious chapter. Can't wait to see what kind of 'exotic' taste the new Lord will have. heh heh.
person deep serenity
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok I wanted to read all the "hunt" chaps before i reviewed, very good, this story is very emotional but on a mostly realistic front so I am very happy about that. I like where this is going about the "gril and her brother" sick, but again, could happen, probably has somewhere in history so it is believable. Now the only thing I don't like is that Inu has been neglected in this story as far as I am concerned, (to me it is easy to tell you your fav char is, Sess!) which if this was Rin I could understand, but don’t you think Inuyasha should have played a bigger role, I mean he didn’t even get his target. And yes I know that you explained this away by have Kagome and Sess bond, but still I think Inuyasha should have given a little more detail in this story.
With that said I am very happy at the way you don’t ignore the other characters and their feelings(which I think to many Inu writers do) so good job, and seeing as how I still have about 7 more chaps to go, maybe you do involve Inu more…if not this story overall is wonderful and I’m sure I will enjoy the rest.
person Gem
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TO GOOD!!! I wondered if that is what you had planned when you hinted about the punishment fitting the crime. Perfect. And the finishing touches of the healing and not being able to talk, that is truley worthy of Sess himself. I think the idea of payback for all the suffering caused ideal.
person deep serenity
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well...(face flamming) chapt 29 was...hmmm great, I really wish INU could be my boyfriend for one night. anyway, I have read lots of different stories where he marked her and I think this is one of the best. Because darn it he is half demon and I hate when they have him acting to "soft" because human or demon sex tends to bring out the animalistic side in most so i thought your scene was very very good, not to mention all the sexual tension of four years, so it needed to be very passion filled and couldn't be to soft. Good job
person Midnight_Sparrow
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How very fitting.
person New Fan
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
With the drop of Sess blood and the genes of his parents( which produced his sister, in which he hated because of her beauty and the
constant attention she recieve from her parents) Nasuki (sorry for mispelling her name) must be one HOT MOMMA. I really fell sorry for
him now. Update soon
person kashuneko
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rock on. A most fitting punishment!
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT! I was so hoping for something like this!!! And if your stronger than usual warning at the top of this chapter means the good stuff is coming, I just can't wait!
If faster than next week is a possibility, then here's my vote!!!
person essie
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn what comes around goes around he hehehehe please update soon