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all right ha ha this it just what he get

Did you just add the scene with Sesshy, Inuyasha and Kagome watching the attack? Because it was amazingly well written, and I read it through like 4 times. I don't remember seeing it before!

Okay, LMAO, I am twisted and thought it was so funny!!!!!!!!!!
good job, and so fitting I wish this could be done to every rapist.... anyway, I loved it EXCEPT please when you have time take out the he/she stuff, anyone who has made it this far in the story knows what is going on, it greatly distracted from the chapter and the details of what was going on. I understand what you were doing, but any reader mature enough to read this chapter will be able to follow along without the he/she thing.

good job, and again very creative story.

I'm thinking it's a sign of my own humanity that I actually feel sorry for him/her. Part of me thinks I shouldn't, but I do anyway.

Yay. I'm not jaded beyond all hope!!!

Story continues to rock.

ooh that was soooooooooo good, but more, I want the little weasel to suffer more...yes I am cruel, but somone like that deserves more pain than one can ever be inflicted, his mom, sister??? damn the man is sick, and for what he did to Kagome got him this payment...go Kagome for having faithfull and loving friends who would do such a thing for her and get away with it hehe...gotta love that part...sigh..ok I am being morbid I guess but still think he deserves more punishment and cant wait to see what his new MASTER has in store for him, hehe, great chap cant wait for the next one, till then keep up the awsome work, be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

Ok This chapter for me was too good. I say you went easy on the motherfucker and I wish for more harm to come to him/her.
I feel that it's not enough!! Punish him/her more!! I would like to know what the southern lord will do to it!! I'm not sick, I just don't believe that is enough but it IS A FUCKING DAMN GREAT START!!!!!! KEEP IT UP!! Your a damn good writer!! By all means don't hold back. Be as graphic as you possible can, the more the better. I don't like reading things like this and if I just read this chapter and not the others I would say your one sick bastard but because I read this from the very beginning I say bring it on and make the boy pay for everything and BEYOND.

perfection of retribution

this very very very great dsmn update

I never thought that Sess and Kouga would sully their hands on him/her Natsuki. I hope that Kagome will never find out about that. Update soon.

I repeat myself from earlier: I NEVER want to be on Sesshoumaru's bad side...