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for You Darkness...

by Vyncent

person Bianca
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tear* That was sad. I'm happy that kagome got her wishes though. She was very thoughtful for this. I love this story. Its just great. I can't wait for the rest! Keep it comin!
person Akdreamer
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That has to be the most emotional and heart felt story I've ever read... I think people could honestly learn something from this story... LIke there are people out there who can and will help when needed... And the power of friendship is the best feeling......You might have put a horrible crime in this story, but the outcome was wonderful and judical...Thank you and keep up the great work!!! I can honestly say I enjoyed this story very, very much.
person J
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The title is very fitting for this chapter and the story is very endearing and beautifully written. I like how everything had fallen in to place. The story in gerenal has always been very beautifully written and thank you for putting this up. I hope this story is in no way ending any time soon. Even through it would have to end sometime I just hope not now and not like this.
I AM TRULY A DEEP AND TRUE FAN OF THIS STORY AND YOUR WORK. KEEP IT UP. GOD BLESS AS ALWAYS!!!!
person Gem
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter. Loved the way it was happy and sad at the same time.
person essie
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah this great really great update
person New Fan
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This better not be the end!! I hope the you will have an epiologue. Great story.
person Deep Serenity
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay read the last two chaps and the torture scenes were great, and well done, detail, makes things like that pop out. anyway overall great writing.
person Midnight_Sparrow
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn
person Apathy5
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story and I really like it alot. I don't usually read dark fics, but your's sounded interesting so I gave it a try. Talk about divine retribution! If only we could do this in real life. I love what Sess and Kouga did to the leader. Its just really a good story. I see why you won that award. So I wanted to review and let you know.
person New Fan
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You were not lying that this chapter was very dark. I think that was the most darkest story I ever read. Horrific!!