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for You Darkness...

by Vyncent

person morlana
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah such limbo, I can't wait for the next write, the battle scenes were great i felt like i was there.
person Diane
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really like this fic, the only thing I don't like about it is that you used the bad Elizabethan of the American dub for poor Kaede, in the Japanese version & I think the translated manga she speaks formally not in bad Elizabethan. Looking forward to finding out what happens next.
person lynn
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story was truly amazing to read that it took 17 hours to read every last chapter. i just joined fanfiction a couple of month ago ,not knowing about the adult version and the first story i read happen to be yours. thank you and today i have a new favorite author
person Midnight_Sparrow
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's certainly an interesting chapter ending! Lol.

I liked the battle. It worked well.
person bettychan
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was another great chapter. But that was a mean place to end the chapter. I can't wait til you update again.
person Gem
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow interesting turn of events to say the least! I wondeed if you were about to finish the story with Inu and Kagome returning to the feudal era. This was totally unexpedted. But what a great suprise! Talk about closure! And well written as always, and just when I thought it couldn't get any better.
person Birdie_Blythe
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG... I love this story! Three cheers for your talent and ability to use it well.
person Midnight_Sparrow
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D:D:D:D:D
person Deep SErenity
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
going away chap-excellent! Almost made me cry, yay for pups!!!!!!!
Also loved the wish and the park and the like. I want to thank you for knowing when to wrap up a story(though I know there might be a couple more chaps left) but I feel to many of Inuyasha stories keep going when there is nothing left to say i.e. ruining what might have started out as a good story.

You have down a wonderful job of setting the plot and following through with it, (not veering off on non-important issues just to make the story longer)

Thank you for a terrific read!
person RoseElle
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is great i'm only on chapter 15 but it is really good so far!!

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