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by Vyncent

person Cutie Pie Hentai- not logged in
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"With great power comes great responsibility?" Midoriko quoted Peter Parker's Uncle? Did Kagome accidentally leave a Spiderman comic laying around Fuedal japan? LOL...sorry, it just struck me and I had to snicker....
person Lanie
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just luv reading this!
person sexililkagome
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...i want the next chapter >.
person Bianca
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is Awsome!!! I can't wait to read the rest. I mean wow, this all makes sense. Update soon please!!^_^
person claudine
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think this was a greta stroy i loved i couldnt put it down i just hope you can finish it soon i want to know the ending so bad lol inpationt lol tschuss claudine
person Darkkittenn
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im not signed in... lol... to lazy *grins* I Must say, you are enlightened in the ways of sex scenes. I like how straight foward you are and dont use "other names" for things. May the gods be praised someone is a much as a nympho as I am. LOL. Keep em' coming... in more than one way! *Smiles*
person inuficcrzy
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you don't mean ryokotsu do you?

holy cow, that would be awesome! i can't wait to see more!!!
person WiccanMethuselah
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHHHH!!!! I **HATE** cliffhangers like this! Please, please, PLEASE don't tell me I have to go back and read the whole darned thing from the beginning to figure this out ... I've had to do that with about five or six other fics in the past week and its wearing me out (J/K!)!! I must tell you, however, this chapter was EXCELLENT ... kept me on the edge of my 'puter chair yet again. Brilliant writing, great set-up, scene development, plot continuity ... you REALLY need to start writing your own stuff and get paid for things like this!!!! Thanks so much for another engrossing read! :-D
person essie
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great update
person Deep Serenity
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well chap 35 was long, and took an unexpected turn, did not see this chapter coming and for some reason I feel as if another story is beginning...since the rest of your story has been relevent I will assume this is also. THe writing and feeling of the chapter is good and I will wait to see where this goes.