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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been following your story from the start, and it is very well written. I would like to ask if this is going to be a Kag/IY pairing. I couldn't imagine different, but it is not my story so... Do you know how long it is going to be? You are very descriptive, which is good, and it looks to be quite lengthy. I am eagerly waiting for them to get to Kagome's time. Keep up the good work.
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it & the plot is good, but for heavens sake drop the excessive Japanese especially the onna stuff, I'm not even sure that's Japanese since the only character I've come across that uses it is Wufei the Chinese pilot from Gundam Wing. It's especially silly to use onna & woman in the same sentence as you did in 1 of the chapters. I would just replace all the onna's you used with girl, etc & call it good.
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read rape scence in the past (not to many) and I feel this one of the best one out there or that I ever read.
You did not focus only on the rape but on the healing and the needed support that Kagome will need to get
through it. Please updat this story soon.
You did not focus only on the rape but on the healing and the needed support that Kagome will need to get
through it. Please updat this story soon.
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome story. I'm very proud of the way you have handled the feelings, emotions and aftermath of what a rape victim would feel. You are also correct regarding the kind of help Kag will need to help her recover mentally. Thank you for handling such a realistic horror in a delicate and informative way. GREAT JOB! Now, lets go kick some rapist ass, shall we. I will anxiously be awaiting for the next chapter.
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... a fitting retribution. And if InuYasha hadn't insisted on linking, I would've been disappointed in him.
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now it is getting interesting. I can not wait until they are exposed to the future. How will they react to it? Update soon.
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Will the other link with Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha to see what happen to Kagome? Update ssoooonnn!!! Great story.
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, continue this story.
I've been bawling my eyes out reading this. I have to know what happens next.
I've been bawling my eyes out reading this. I have to know what happens next.
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing... but god, poor Kagome goes through hell ;). She is a strong girl though... I only hope this doesn't break her.
--julie
--julie
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can not wait for those beast to pay the price. Update soon.