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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap!
It's been a while since I checked on this story. It is now 4 AM, and I should have been in bed hours ago. However, I kept getting pulled along by your well developed plotline to read that fateful "one last chapter." I especially like your cliffhanger endings for each chapter.
It's been a while since I checked on this story. It is now 4 AM, and I should have been in bed hours ago. However, I kept getting pulled along by your well developed plotline to read that fateful "one last chapter." I especially like your cliffhanger endings for each chapter.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please please update!!!! the story rocks i want moooorrrrrree--cmon im dying here.
i see very few flaws in your approach to writing this story. your grammar is above average, and though not perfect, i recognize that it is exceptionally better than most stories i have read.
Fate's Wisdom
i see very few flaws in your approach to writing this story. your grammar is above average, and though not perfect, i recognize that it is exceptionally better than most stories i have read.
Fate's Wisdom
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god.....
i think that you should look over your reviews (again/if u havent already)
i just skimmed half of them
Be proud of what you have accomplished, if u do what i ask you will see the sheer quantity of souls you have touched today. im crying right now, its amazing that your story has helped so many people look back at what happened (i went and skimmed a quarter of ur reviews and i saw a handful of people who were touched and just gave me a sense Through the review of how relieved and sad they were reading this. i think it helped a lot of people come ot terms with their past and you should be so proud of what you have done. i see that you have ddone what the characters in your story did- your showed that people do understand.)
im overjoyed that a step has been taken
song now:
I, can see a world, of one great family.
living in peace and brotherhood,
living in harmony.
but the world, in which we live
is a very different place.
fear and hate, affect us all,
every color, creed, and race.
so we must climb the walls and cross the raging rivers.
we must,
make a world of peace our common goal.
we can make a difference
we can build a bridge,
and open up the pathway to our souls!
ONE SMALL STEP, BRINGING US ALL A LITTLE BIT CLOSER.
ONE SMALL STEP, BEGINNING TODAY!
IF WE ALL JOIN HAND IN HAND,
EVERY NATION EVERY LAND!
WE CAN TAKE ONE,
SMALL,
STEP.....
LEADS THE WAY...........
Fate's Wisdom
i think that you should look over your reviews (again/if u havent already)
i just skimmed half of them
Be proud of what you have accomplished, if u do what i ask you will see the sheer quantity of souls you have touched today. im crying right now, its amazing that your story has helped so many people look back at what happened (i went and skimmed a quarter of ur reviews and i saw a handful of people who were touched and just gave me a sense Through the review of how relieved and sad they were reading this. i think it helped a lot of people come ot terms with their past and you should be so proud of what you have done. i see that you have ddone what the characters in your story did- your showed that people do understand.)
im overjoyed that a step has been taken
song now:
I, can see a world, of one great family.
living in peace and brotherhood,
living in harmony.
but the world, in which we live
is a very different place.
fear and hate, affect us all,
every color, creed, and race.
so we must climb the walls and cross the raging rivers.
we must,
make a world of peace our common goal.
we can make a difference
we can build a bridge,
and open up the pathway to our souls!
ONE SMALL STEP, BRINGING US ALL A LITTLE BIT CLOSER.
ONE SMALL STEP, BEGINNING TODAY!
IF WE ALL JOIN HAND IN HAND,
EVERY NATION EVERY LAND!
WE CAN TAKE ONE,
SMALL,
STEP.....
LEADS THE WAY...........
Fate's Wisdom
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i didnt say it in that last review but a lot of your readers were first hand rape victims or people who knew someone who suffered through that crime.
Once again,
Fate's Wisdom
Once again,
Fate's Wisdom
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update as soon as you can this the best story I have read thus far.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please.. please continue this story.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story I hope you continue soon
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOODNESS THIS STORY IS LIKE THE BEST!!! Its so well explained and well planned out. I can Imagine everything that the characters are doing and the battle is so well explained. Its just tooooooo gooooooooooooood!!!! I hope you update soon because I got to know what happens next!^_^
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wonderful! An update!!! In the last chapter I feared the story would ... well... just finish with a nice smooth happy ending and that's it. I am soooooo glad that there is action and suspense again! I just love this story! What will happen now? I am really looking forward to reading more!
CU
Silver
CU
Silver
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story soo far i have read all 38 chapters please post another chapter this story is sooo exciting and it reminds me of a story that has been published by a great known author u convey such feelings in your writing i was literally crying and that what a true author does he/she makes u wanna laugh,cry,throw things and many more and that is what i felt when i read ur story please i beg of u write another chapter!!!!!!
SMOOCHES,
Brittnae Gassaway
SMOOCHES,
Brittnae Gassaway