rate_review Reviews

One down. many to go.

I love this fic.the author gives good desscription and detail as to what is going on in the story .

First off let me say you have done an excellent job of handling the rape issue but there are a few things to make want to try and imporve.

I am just wondering would Inuyasha really ask for all that help, I believe in I not mistaken that he has never ask for help from his brother ever in the manga or anime I know they teamed up to save Kagome & Rin but that was mainly out of need.

Secondly some of your chapters don't really do anything to further the plot and Kagome still hasn't come too I understand the brutallity of rape but 16 chapters in and we haven't even got to who the suspects are and were they are at.

All in all it is a solid story but you might want to think a series of certain points you want to make in a chapter and then move on to the next because like I said we are 16 chapters in the and all we know is Kagome got raped and now the Inu-Tachi is planning a attack.

Good luck with the rest of your writing.

hey this is an awsome stiry i hope you update soon thanx

Jake.

I have to say I may not have reviewed all the other chapters due to the fact I just could not tear my eyes away from reading this story.... This is a cool fic and I hope you continue.... Can't wait to excited.... Update soon....

I cannot wait to see how all of this is going to end!.....Good stuff

I like where this story is going. I am glad the 'hunt' has not happen yet. Please update soon.

Hmmmm.....

hey this is awsome. please update soon. thanx.

Jake.

I hope that the next chapter it the "HUNT". Update soon.