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for You Darkness...

by Vyncent

person kashudoreineko
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have had me sobbing through this whole story.

It's so terrifically written - and I'm using the original use of the word - meaning full of terror - as well as the common use of the word.

One of my best friends in college was raped.

I've never read anything that's been so... on. It tears at your heart. And you want to read more. You want to see these characters that you love do something about this. Bring justice.

I eagerly await more updates.

KdN
person Cutie Pie Hentai
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I've been a terrible reader. I look everyday for new updates and this is the first time I've reviewed. Knowing how much I love reviews myself, it's unforgivable. i promise i'll try to be better from now on...forgive me? All in all, I love the story. Looking forward to finding out what happens with the punishment as well as what will develop when Kagome is feeling better...after all, inuyasha has OBVIOUSLY decided how he feels about her. One constuctive criticism- I noticed that your grammar has deteriorated- not that it detracts much from the story, but it seems that in your haste to post quickly (for which I am grateful), the spelling and punctuation has suffered. If you need a beta, I am more than willing. All in all, though, thanks for the fic and I look forward to more.
Ja ne!
person Jake
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good story and it is getting very good. please update soon. thanx.

Jake.
person Mija
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg that made me cry...I loved this chap...poor Ginta and that freak who couldnt stop his disgusting act even after the girl was dead...ooh I hope they make them all pay...damn this is such a sad but wonderfull fic I soooo cant wait for more I search everyday to see if there is a new chap to this fic, I cant wait for an update, wonderful story and wonderfull work, I admire it very much, ty ty ty till next chap much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person New Fan
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ginta. He was not lucky to find a woman alive. That chapter was very sad. You must update soon. I must
Find out what Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru prey will be. Waaaaah "sniff, sniff".
person shelly
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this story. it is sooo good. do u know how long u plan to make it?? but i love how u add all the little details, it helps me better to make an image in my mind as well as enjoy the story better. very very very good job!! ^-^ can't wait to read the rest!
person Rosa
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!This is a great story!I cant wait to find out what will happen next!
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an original concept, getting everyone sent to the future together. I always wondered how different characters (especially Sesshomaru) would react to modern day times. I do so love the stories of cooperation. There are a few of you great writers out there who put Inu Yasha and Sesshomaru on the same team, and I LOVE it! I can't wait for more, hope you update often! Thanks for sharing!
person New Fan
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update so that I can see who will be the youkai next victim.
person Mija
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh more please more!!!!!!....this is sooooo good the last three chapters were very good, well written and I could just see and feel the images, ooh cant wait to see what Inu and Sesshy find and Ginta too, hehe ooh this hunting is good I feel sooooooo sorry for the leader..NOT they all deserve it dang it...anyhow great work please keep it up and soo cant wait for an update ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija...:-)