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for You Darkness...

by Vyncent

person Belle1089
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awsome story u have pdate soon
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the story please update soon!
person Midnight_Sparrow
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad it was InuYasha who found Ayumi and not Sesshoumaru, though I dunno why...
person WaterGoddess
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is awsome i actually feel the saticfaction if the suffering of the night walkers please reveiw!
person PJ
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So is Inuyasha going back out since he didn't find his 'prey' this time? I am glad Kagome's friend was found it was cool that Inuyasha found her with the others. It also sounded like in one of the earlier chapters that they found one that was not their 'prey' I wonder what they will do with him? I am also concerned that one of the wolves picked up a trail from the shrine. The use of all the japanese words kind of bothered me at first but you put the translations at the bottom THANK YOU for doing that some people don't. I am used to the words now and I think it is pretty cool actually. Keep writing this is a great story
person joey
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this is a great story!!! You may want to check something though "Not even Yuka, Ayumi, or Hojo will learn of anything you tell me," she assured the hanyou." I thought it was Ayumi that actually said this? Update again soon this is good
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*asks hopefully, hoping that there's no filler chapter coming instead* Inu and Sess next?
person PJ
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Are any of the victoms Kagome's friend or will Sessy or Inuyasha find her. I can't wait to see what those two find and how they will handle it. Update again soon I look forward to new chapters of this story.
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really, really good. I'm anxious to see Sess and Inu make an appearance and for the rapists to be taken wherever you're planning on taking them so the potion can be administered to them. I think it's time to move on the revenge part. I'm just an impatient person, LOL. Another great chapter. Keep them coming.
person Bloop
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap! How many victims and men are involved in this? What makes these guys so powerful that no one could find them before Inuyasha's group?