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for You Darkness...

by Vyncent

person joey
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a cool story but I am a bit disappionted that is seems like Kagome got over being raped or like nothing happened. Alot of stories do this and it kind of irks me that people just write about someone being raped and then just "blow it off" I understand that she loves Inuyasha and he saved her, etc but most woman would still not want to have sex that soon after being raped especially if it was her first time. So I hope you can come up with a good reason why she was so willing to have sex so soon and why the rape is not effecting her. Anyway I will keep reading this is still good so keep writing
person Gem
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well worth waiting for, nicely done.Also a good counter point to the darkness of the previous chapters. I think it balances them out. Can't wait for the next install!
person Mija
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh wow another terrific chapter and congradulations on the nominations, I myself had intended to nominate ya but someone beat me to it, sniffles, even on the unworthy one too...sigh, but I do get to vote hehe....anyhow best of luck and another truelly wonderful chapter always look foward to another one, till then be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person New Fan
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who was the person spying on Kagome and Inuyasha? Hey, what
happen to the leader? I hope that answer is cleared up? Update soon.
person WiccanMethuselah
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a gripping, well-told, finely written tale. Dark, yes. Angst-ridden, yes. Possible to leave for even a minute .... NO! I am impreessed by the skill with which you weave the tale, bring the threads together and bind the story. I can hardly wait to see what happens when Kagome awakens, what Sesshoumaru will do next, whether or not the necklaces were all returned, or if some of the travelers will return to the future without InuYasha or Kagome. Thank you for making a winter day so much more enjoyable!
person kashudoreineko
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is she going to change him into a girl???? That's my guess.
That would be rockin! Then they give him the memory potion and he'd truly be able to appreciate the horror he created for those other girls.

I'm so enjoying this story!
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good!

I can't wait to see what happens next. Wait I shall though.
person essie
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this great please update
person New
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NO YOU DIDN'T. No you did not do what I think you just did to that poor fool. That potion he took will change him into a WOMAN. But not
some ordinary woman, but a woman with the beautiful feature of Sesshoumaru. YOU EVIL GENUS. Most everyone thinks that Sesshoumaru
has womanly features if it has not been for his cold persona. Now we will see what Sesshoumaru would have look like if he was a girl. Update sooooooon.^_^
person New Fan
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NO YOU DIDN'T. No you did not do what I think you just did to that poor fool. That potion he took will change him into a WOMAN. But not
some ordinary woman, but a woman with the beautiful feature of Sesshoumaru. YOU EVIL GENUS. Most everyone thinks that Sesshoumaru
has womanly features if it has not been for his cold persona. Now we will see what Sesshoumaru would have look like if he was a girl. Update sooooooon.^_^