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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, the suspense continues!!! I can hardly wait to find out what, exactly, he has morphed into ... although I have a feeling I already know what sort of "exotic" tastes the Lord of the Southern Lands might have ... the continued suspense at what the "male" has become is a delight. Your writing is powerful and evocative ... I sincerely hope that you intend to make a 'habit' (career) out of it!!
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Happy that you have updated. I very much enjoy not only you concept in this story, but your style of writing as well. It has a texture to it somehow. I find it makes for a very vivid mental image. Waiting in anticipation for the next installment
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can not keep us waiting. You must update this story sooooon.
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so anxious to see how that rapist is tortured. I'm actually biting my nails in anticipation. I wasn't really clear though of what Koga's gift was. Were they slaves to be presented to the other lord? Anyway, hurry with the rest. Oh. I think I know what the liquid he drank did. I bet it turns him into a woman, hehehe. That way he can really feel what he had done to the other women he tortured and killed. That would be a fitting sentence.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Could you tell me who is the watcher at the end of the story? You refer to the Watcher as they, why?
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the most beautiful chapters I've read in quite sometime.......the way you wrote InuYasha and Kagome's connection.....I was about to cry. Good Stuff!!!!
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the watcher is???
This story is so brilliantly woven together, that each chapter pains me because when I am done with it, I have to wait for the next.
I'm not wordsmith enough to craft together phrases that can convey how much this story has touched me. I eagerly await more.
This story is so brilliantly woven together, that each chapter pains me because when I am done with it, I have to wait for the next.
I'm not wordsmith enough to craft together phrases that can convey how much this story has touched me. I eagerly await more.
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a MARVELOUS end to a searing story. I enjoyed all the twists and turns this took; my only regret is that you did not dwell just a little more on the "changes" that were to overcome the rapist. All in all, a fic that I would HIGHLY recommend to others!
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D:D
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
about time they did it this great please update