rate_review Reviews

Usually I don't care for DARK stories and would stop reading them after a chapter or two, but I couldn't stop reading this one. That just goes to show how GOOD it is. I certainly hope you decide to complete it someday. Good stories such at this one deserve an ending. Hope to hear from you soon.

Not sure if you're aware, but chapter 15 and 16 are together. I'm probably not the first to point this out, but if you have time, you might want to fix it.

I have to say, though, that so far, that's the only real problem I've noticed. I've waited until now to review because I've been that caught up in the story. Despite the dark subject matter, I am thoroughly enjoying it. Everything leads to something else, with an explanation or reason for what happens. I'm still curious about the emotional tie between Kagome and Sesshomaru, but I'm sure you'll get to that later.

Well, I'm off to read more!

Damn. Pure and simple. Looking forward to them getting the bastards. Really glad that she's all healed up.

This is an awesome story! I hope someday you are able to finish it!

i havent even read the story yet, but you've got me hooked from the first paragraph!

Hey there! Are you going to continue this story?

This story has got me on edge, I wanna know whats going to happen... Good job!

nicely done. your characterization is pretty good, a little off at some points, but pretty good. i hope to see more soon.

Hey, I'm enjoying this story but I found something out of place in this chapter. In Japanese culture and the worship of the Kamis, the sun is female not male as in grecian cultures of the west. There's a whole myth about how her brother and sister Kami have to lure her out with mirrors and such. If your interested in keeping to the japanese theme which it looks like with all the words that you have in romanji text. Thanks for the great read. I hope the rest of the chapters (which I'm slowly going through) are as good as these have been.

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