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Well, I have to admit I like this fic. I love all Sess/Rin pairings, but I haven't had much luck looking for many. But out the two or three that I found, yours is one of the best! Er, um, well I think the story is a little to, uh, rough, could be the word, but otherwise it was an amazing story to read. The format and writing are quite exquiste (did I spell that righ?)! I think that when Rin died, I was pretty much saddened by it, but you picked it up quite well. Yeah, and to those two reviewers, (I don't want to remeber your names, it makes me quesy thinking about such boring names) why the HELL are you here? You aren't going to read something lovy-duvy. Damn, do you not know how to read or something? Fanfiction.net has those crappy, mary-sue's. Or perhaps one where Romance gives you that insy-bitty knot in your stomach that makes say say "How Romantic". Or maybe you want Kagome to be with Sess (the horror! Poor Inu, he got with Kikiyou probabaly...eww... creepy, yet if your into that whole "Night of the living Crypt" then whatever.). Either way, learn to read, please, there are enough illiterate people in this world.

Just telling it as it is!

Bye, please write more, I'm barely on chapter 12. I had to review before I fogot and head off to sleep.
AMAZING FIC!!!!

-Yogi

This has got to be the greatest Sess/Rin story ever written please, please, please update this soon. I really need to know what is going to happen!!!!!

WOW!!!!!! DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS CHAPTER....THANK YOU SO MUCH..YOU ARE SUCH A GREAT WRITER..WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHO EVER INSPIRED YOU I THANK HIM OR HER!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND AGAIN I SAY WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey! I thought that the lemon in this is as good as, if not better than the one in chap. 12! I hope that you have more coming up like it!!

I just started reading this and read the first two chapters. You have a very powerful way of describing sex that I really like. I have to confess, I haven't even got to the part of the manga with Rin but I think they could be a great couple when they grow up. And why else would there be so many romantic and hentai doujinshi about them? I'll be reading the rest soon.

Not many stories have the ability to hold my attention like this one. Its not just a quick one time read and forget. This story captivates my imagination and leaves me yearning to read the next chapter. It has taken me four days but i have finally finished reading chapter 15, and i can't wait to see the next installment. Truly a story written by an intellegent and passionate writer, i anxiously await the coming chapters.

I actually haven't checked the reviews for this story until today. I'm glad to see that so many people like it! And I'd like to say thank you to "One Angry Ass Reviewer" for sticking up for me. Chapter 16 will be coming along soon.

To KareiSama and Ashley--
Oh, yes, Sesshoumaru certainly acts like a father. He ignores her most of the time, only bothering to keep her from getting killed and not much else. Sounds like the perfect father to me. Yah, right. Perhaps he's a guardian, but there's no familial love goin' on, that's for sure. And I certainly do not approve of underaged sex. Rin is very much past puberty in all of my fics, and she's not being seduced or tricked into anything. If you think that sex between two consenting, non-related adults is "just sick," then you're either too young or too much of a prude. I believe that KareiSama mentioned that it was "sickening" because Rin was human. So you don't approve of Inuyasha and Kagome? Do you think that it's disgusting that Kagome love him because he's only half-human? Demons in this story aren't animals. Those that take human form are just as intelligent, if not moreso, than humans. Maybe you need to watch the show more? Or perhaps pay attention thise?
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I'm surprised that you two came to AdultFanFiction.net, read the summary and the questionable title, and assumed a G-rated fic. It's a bit naive...but then again, you two aren't quick on the uptake, it seems.

I just finished chapters 1-15, and I really, really love it. This is so well written and unbelievably epic tale, to see Sess and Rin is this way is refreshing. I really hope you update soon, because I don't think I could survive without knowing what is going to happen next.

Hey KareiSama and Ashley, why don't you two pathetic bitches die slowly! The summary for this fic cleary states that this is a Sesshoumaru/Rin pairing. Iu diu didn't want to read it, you shouldn't have clicked on it Dumbasses! You sound like two old nagging hags from a church group. Don't flame her just because you'll never be able to write this good. I'm mean damn, I could see if Rin was like ten years old in the fic, but she isn't. Besides, it's not like she's his real daughter in the manga anyway. People write Sesshoumaru/Inu Yasha fics, and they don't get flamed. Get the fuck off this site if you don't like what's on it, you hypocritical bitches! KareiSama, please learn how to spell: 'Wha is wrong with you?'. Ashley how the fuck could you have thought this fic was going to be about fatherly love? If you wanted to read about 'fatherly love', what the fuck are you doing on AdultFanFiction.net. Take your ass to Fanfiction.net and read a G rated fic, because your explanation for flaming her makes no sense. How fucking stupid are you? Quote: "I'm telling all my friends NOT to read this story." If your friends can't think for themselves on what they should read, then fuck you and your friends too. Besides, I bet they already reais, is, and love it. KuroNekosama has many fans of her work, and who gives a shit what you and your friends like! KuroNekosama, I think you're a brillawritwriter, obviously others do too...that's why they plagiarize it. I love all the fics you've written, and I hope you continue to write great ones like this. I have never had the pleasure of reading any Inu Yasha fics, as good as the ones you have managed to write. Your talent with words in indescribable. This is truly an excellent job, as always!

Wow! I really have to commend you on a great story plot and the detailing. Hopes on Chapter 16 soon.