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oh man was that hot and steamy?! i love this story and especially moinceince i started reading this story on ff.net a year or so but never got to finish it since it was deleted. stupid ff.net. and it was was left at a cliff hanger too. oh well. i have to admite though that this chapter was lacking the usual composure than the other chapters. its not that theres no lemons (god knows that theres enought lemons in this story to last me a while) but the contents and the goin ons are alittle to broad and lack luster. oh well. i hope to read more of ur story. update soon.

I thought it was a very good read and look for more.

Please please please finish this before I die from how wonderful it is. I am amazed and delighted by your amazginly clear and intelligent writing style. The story has enthralled me and I am so happy you wrote it!! Please finish it soon! so I can re-read it!

Sesshomaru's character fits so very closely with my view of him and the intimate scenes are truly intense and wonderful.

Tell me, how do you write it without getting incredibly embarrassed in the process?? I'm working on my own Rin\Sessh story but... the sexual scenes just aren't sitting well with me.

Please finish soon and if you can, a word of advice to me? email is Shaid1979@aol.com

Merci!!! You're wonderful!!!

OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST FANFICTION I'VE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!! you had better update soon though or i will be one mad kitty................this story was soooo good! i generally never rfanffanfics that are longer than 10 chapters because i never have the attention span to continue reading more than that but fan fanfic kept my attention and thats rare... plus you added just enough lemon in the story so that it was tasteful but not overpowering the storyline..... I LOVED IT!! You have to update soon please... this story is soooo good it would be a shame not to finish it off. so please update soon!
~your devoted fan.... Magroku

Oh My Fucken God!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!! this is one of thst fst fanfics i've ever read in my entire life!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Continue the wonderful work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS GREAT!!!!!!

your fics were one of the first that i've read...a very long time ago on another site, so i probably haven't written a review for them here.
this is one of my fave fics. just love sess x rin pairings and this story is just so super steamy. love it. i've read some parts more than
once...pretty sure you have a good idea of which parts. the story is really captivating and your style of writing is superb. please write more
sess x rin fics cuz you're really good at depicting their relationship
-miyu

I cannot even begin to tell you how wonderful this story is. I mean...I read good stories, great stories, terrific stories, all of which I could explain and compliment with those words. But your story...I can't say I know a word that is good enough to descirbe it. ^^ Hopefully that's acceptable. I think I spent...a little over a week to read this whole thing. I abandoned all other stories and simply focused on this one, see seeming to be able to stop after I got halfway through a chapter. Usually in these kinds of stories, I skim through a lot of the parts, but I hung onto your every word. The way you described things were simply amazing.

I didn't know I was this into Sesshoumaru/Rin stories until now. And to tell you the truth, once I reached the chapter where Rin had passed away and Sesshoumaru was going to go out and find her reincarnation, I thought I would begin to dislike it. But alas...I kept reading and your story only got that much better. Not only that, but I usually don't like original characters having a big role in a story like this, but I fell in love with Inutaisho, Genbu, Toku, and Karran. You gave them each a different, likable personality and everything. =D And I'm also not a big fan of OC/OC either. But I, for some reason, really love the relationship you brought upon Inutaisho and Yokiro. I love it!! And Toku and Ikkutso's (I'm sorry if I spelled that wrong) bond is great also. I'm just beginning to wonder who exactly *him* is, lol.

I spent so much time reading this...not being able to wait for the end. I seriously thought 17B was the end. And then I find out...it's not!? And you haven't updated!? Are you trying to kill me or something?! *s dos down from having gone temporarily insane* Anyway..ill ill definitly make sure to check back now and then to see if you have any more chapters up. Gotta see what happens when they finally get ahold of the Shikon no Tama! Update real soon, okay?

Enula

hey, this is a really good story. You have great skill to write something like this, so update soon and finish the story.

I LOVE IT!LOVE IT!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!More PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh my gosh!!!! i love you sooo much, you dont kno how long i've wiated for you to update.