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WOW this story is really great. I' happy that the final brother has finally met his atch. You had me worried for a minutes with the death of the other fire deon. How often do u update? I can't wait until the story has finished!!!!!!

Uh.....Wow! All I can say is Lucky Rin! Very graphic writing. It was as though I was right there. You are talented. I read the first 3 chapters, and it seems as though this took more than 2 days. Whew! I'm going to continue now, looking foward to reading the rest, Thank you for sharing your talent with the readers.

Let me just add that, even though Rin and Sesshoumaru relationship has turned, In this story this WOMAN knew what she wanted, there were never any inication on his part that he was being fartherly, only a care giver. There are those who can care for the well beint of one without emotional attachment. You keep on writing. It's only fantasy which I love, and you are doing great!

O.o! Another match made perfectly by you! ^_^ Lovely chapter and I'm so glad that you have been able to update! * sighs * I have only one complaint though..there seems to be words that are chopped up beyond comprehension through out the chapter. I don't know if you've already been informed since I don't usually read reviews, and especially when I'm already into a story. Anyhoo, sorry if you've been beat over the head with this already...But it was still a good chapter. @_@ Only thing is...I think I need to re-read from chapter one...Heh heh...^^;; I'm a bit confused on some things ( plus its a good excuse to re-read such a wonderful fic! Tee hee! ^_^ ). Until next time! ^_^

YAY! what a good chapter after so long too. Ooo I can't wait, please update soon^^!!!!

This is a great story, please update soon!!!

As always, I am very moved and awed by your writing. I love the revisions that you have done. You are correct in that the words flow more than they did before.
Once I start reading your stories I can not stop.
I am a huge Rin and Sesshomaru fan and I love the way that you protray the characters

I was wondering where your stories went. I can't get on your site for anything. I love your fics. I can't wait for the update.

I love this story!!! You have definitely gotten better in creating the mood for
the lemons. *blushes* The family tradegy was so well fitted into this story.
Please update soon! ^_^

ah.
So good.
PLEASE finish this soon. You'll kill me with the wait otherwise!