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for Wet Dreams

by kimbop

person cuttie_blossom
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
is it a dream?!?!? do tell plz!!!
person Nefra
schedule May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This would make an excellent ongoing story. Makes one wonder if Sesshoumaru 'rutted' with her then put her back in the spring or if she dreamed it all. Kinda like "The Lady or the Tiger". Hope to see either another chapter to this one or another story by you in the future.
person sessylover
schedule May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! SO COOL!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!
person Bsasami153
schedule May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Doesn't Kagome have anything better to do than hang out in the hot spring...? Like your one-shot scene.
person Katzztar
schedule May 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story!! I hope there's more to it!

I'm glad that I'm not the only who thinks that Sesshoumaru would last longer than one go at sex.
Kami, he's a powerful demon, he has more stamina that a mortal man. Stamina would mean not only would he tire less(compared to a human) in a battle, but he would last longer during sex. And yes to others out there it is possible for a human to have sex for hours ( rare, but possible). So a youkai should last for some time.

I like the phrase "catatonic bliss". I had one lover that was able to keep up for 3 hrs, and yes catatonic bliss derscribes it quite well, when at one point I realized I was on top , my back to his face, and I can't remember how I got that way :) Catatonic bliss indeed

Mostriesries have the guy reaching his climax the same time as the lady. That does't happen too often in real life.

Your fic seemed quite rsticstic to me, please add more
person ChibiMino
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great job! update soon!