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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love Miroku in this chapter he's funny...still hanging on the edge of the seat waiting for more ;) teach me how to write like you I don't think I'm as good
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooooo! i luv this story!!! man! kikyo's such a bitch! pleeeeeeeeeease write more!!!!
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love the story, only one lil' thing you might want to make a lil bit more space or dots , whatever to signify that your changing scenes, it was a lil hard to follow the last chap. , but great development of plot... keep it up ^_^
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'll keep reviewing for aslong as this story is going...its so much like a novel. I find my suroundings disapearing and your story becomeing my world while I read it...keep up the good work I can't wait for more
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well, that was certainly...different...but really good. plz continue it . till next time, ja ne!
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July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. it's so kool. u have to write more or the suspence will kill me. or justve mve me insane. i really hope kikyou dies a horrible painfull death. update soon je na.
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July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooh that was a cool chapter I hope you update soon...My email is Miss_Marilyn69@yahoo.com could you email me when you post your next chapter please.
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June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i'm really enjoying the story so far. i like the pace of the story. it's just kinda weird 2 read a story that has both kouga and inuyasha in the same gang, usually they're in rival gangs or something like that. is sango gonna show up again? she showed up 4 a scene then nothing else. is she and miroku gonna b 2gether in this story? okay enough of my ramblings. looking 4ward 2 the next update.
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June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapters 1-10 and I really like it! I really need to know who has got Kagome, please post soon!
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June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I think your story is great. Keep it up!