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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great job on the lemon. ^_~ Update soon!
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I see a plot forming here between Sesshomauro Kag Kagome. I notice you do Lemon nicely...for a first timer trying it. Please continue this story.
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Stop trying to avoid having a plot! Even cheap porn on pay-per-view has a plot! And this is way better than cheap porn. So far it's doing good, but it'd be better if you'd stop fighting the plot.
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::snicker:: You and you inability to write something without a plot?! Me and *my* inability to write something WITH a plot!!! I have problems with those....Heheh..::sweat drop:: Come up with story, despirately search for plot later, yup! Thati's what I do.... This is interesting...Please continue it soon. Ja~!!
~LK
~LK
schedule
May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It good! but for Kagome sake, please let the emotionless Fluffy fall for her soon! Keep writing anyway!
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER ^_~ It was great! Please write more soon! PLEASE!
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May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Not bad on the grammar and spelling seems to be perfect. Great job, I hope to see more soon.
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May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...wow... now this is a rather dark fic but still good! Keep writing, i wanna know what will happen next!
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May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool!! Updatw soon!!!!
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May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm guessing that this an AU where Kagome hasn't crossed paths with Sesshoumaru often. Did she come from the future in this fic or from the Feudal times? I noticed there wasn't anything said about 'the strange clothing' and Sesshoumaru didn't say anything about smelling inuyasha on her