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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shichan, take my word on this.....you don't need *any* practice writing lemons. Not ataoll! Next chappie please!
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like it and think it should have a plot
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Doing great, keep on going. You have a great plot going. Don't feel bad if you don't get many reviews though, it's not very common on this site. GREAT JOB, PLEASE COTINUE!!!
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well seriously i like it!! its very creative of u.. u better continue this it has a very nice plot 2 it.. i wanna see wat happends!!
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May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, can't wait for the rest. I love Sesshoumaru!
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May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is very good so far... plz update soon
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May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
believe me your not the only one..and i feel for you..but this chapter was hot..oh yeah. damn ragging teenage hormones..keep updating. maybe the story doesn't need aplot..
format--->introduction, lemon, about a paragraph of something other than sex, then sex again, then another paragraph about something, anything, maybe the weather, then sex again...........once again i say damn ragging teenage hormones.
format--->introduction, lemon, about a paragraph of something other than sex, then sex again, then another paragraph about something, anything, maybe the weather, then sex again...........once again i say damn ragging teenage hormones.
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May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey whats up! My name is toy toy and like all the ather ficheads out there we won't MORE! MORE! of your fanfic. Well got to go just wont'ed to tell you that your fics are GRAET! Bye^_^Bye!
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May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was great so far please continue with it, it seems like it could work its way into a great love story, Thank You Very Much ;)
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like it a lot. I wonder how sess. would act a lil more into this chapter. plz!!!! keep working on this!!