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for A Plan Gone Astray

by blueangel

person Souly
schedule May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was an awesome fic! I write some too, but I never post 'em. Anyways, I just wanted to let you know how much I liked your story. At first it seemed like it was going to be like all the other kag/sess stories (you, the devastated kagome runs into the heartless sess and things just go sappy)... that was such a bad example... Ahem *smoothing her skirt down* I like the twist that your story took. Very interesting! People dont use his demon form much, well the ones i've read. I think they're missin out cus the PUppy makes things so much more interesting! (o^_^o) It's always refreshing to read a story thats a bit out of the ordinary. I would definately love to read a sequel or continuation, or hell, just another Oneshot! (psst...If you haven't noticed, i'm kinda beggin here ^_^;;) oh yeah... btw, when Sess is talking thru his dog form, is he talking talking or like... a mental talking thing? I was just a wee bit confused there. Well, i'll stop rambling now... heh.. *sweatdrop* well, can't wait to read and review your next story! (ps What is your opinion on Sess/Rin?)

-Souly
"Love Tastes like Strawberries"
person pratz
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the Sesshoumaru's saying part (you're mine... blah blah blah...). That's so cool, possessive, and masculine. I wonder what Kagome'll react if it really happen (I wanna see how she couldn't scream anymore, losing her voice after doing *that* with Sesshoumaru.

Please update soon.

ps: should I also review on mediaminer? I think I'll see you here...
person hiyakuprincess
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was not RISQUE that was hella good!!!!Please email me when you update!!!!!
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The magic of fanfictions is that you can wright what you want. You could have Sesshoumaru change the size of his demon body for a more Kagome hight..MORE NOW. please?
person jen
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like your story. it's very good and well written.
person Hopeless Romantic
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful Job! Are you planning on continuing this? It has promise to be quite interesting. Keep up the good work.
person GreaterBeast_Xellas
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh My god....I LOVE IT . YOu should make it into a story please dont stop there. PLEASE
person sayah1112
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO that was REALLY good, please tell me that wasnt THE END and that there IS more...i NEED more! Please! PLease write another chapter, i love your style of writing and this fanfic has ALOT of promise! I really love it *sigh* Good job...well d..PL..PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!

~Sarah
person Rita
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really really liked this. Very unique. And I'll admit, if Sesshoumaru wasn't so large in his true youkai form...Well, I'll leave that to the imagination! ::hes:hes:: Anyway, I can't wait to read more! You did say you might write more? Please please do!!
person imgonnakil
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
how bout another chappie?

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