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for A Plan Gone Astray

by blueangel

person Mich
schedule May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
uh oh. don't tell me that he;s gonna do what i think he's gonna do. geez, can't sesshou be nice every one and a while?!
person Dem
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh. neat.
person Greaterbeast_Xellas
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YESSSS you just made my day better, thank you so much. More
person mikochef21
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I love Sess/Kag fics so much, he needs her to help him be a better "person". I still love InuYasha too ;) stupid Kikyo I hate her I hate her .... sorry bout that ;)
person Rei
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oohh -- I hope you're planning on adding more chapters! But wait, if he wanted to get rid of her, why didn't he just let Kagome die of starvation - that would be easier than him having to get her health back and then kill her! Oh well. Gotta love Sesshoumaru anyway! Update soon!
person sayah1112
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG this was a great chapter! OOO update SOON! I WANT MORE!!!!! ^_^ thanks!
person ChibiMinko
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AH! GODS! Poor Kagome! How could Sessy be so cruel??? **kicks his ass** Update! ^_~

-Miko
person Rita
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh! So glad to see you've decided to continue this! Didn't see that coming, the concubines and all. I prefer angsty, passionate romance to sweet and tender romance, so I like this turn in events. But poor Kagome! Thought she was gonna have better with the brother, only to wake up to another form of emotional hell! But as you said, things are not as they seem, and it appears that Sesshoumaru is starting to grow something of a heart...But will it make a difference against the size of his unbelievably large ego?
Only one way to find out! So update already! Please?!
^_^
person lilyoko
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like it a lot. keep it up. im a really big fan of sess/kag so i love this story a lot. No one i know has done sess. in his demon form b4 and i like it not that i really enjoy beastiality in life.
person DEM
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool!