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for A Plan Gone Astray

by blueangel

person Kurai
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
....is that like .. beastility??? O_O
she made love with him in his dog form right?
person Chandelle
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a way to die...orgasm in french is le peitte morte~the little death...
I had been thinking of using Sesshomaru in the partially changed werewolfish
form in a fic i had planned. Like a previous reviewer mentioned- the size of
him in his demon form...creates a problem that fic writers with lemons can fix,
and the possibilities are endless.

*can't wait till your next chapter


~No matter where you go there you are...
person gelfy
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very awesome
but of coarse you knew that ;)
person nightmareofcat
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow i love it please more and soon
person Mija
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh I liked this...not many people ever bring the dog demons true form into play..and this was very very interesting, and come on really, If you have a guys who can turn into a dog and then lay naked next to him ya just know whats gonna happen..lol...no not a total perv here, just realistic and in keeping with this it makes total sense to me..hehe anyhow loved it, so is it a one shot or will there be more? grrrrr I soo hate when Inu goes to Kikyo..sigh
person GreaterBeast_Xellas
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Was Sess in his true forms size? Shit I want more dont end now.
person Mija
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg..lol..when I read the first chap i thought it was a one shot..then i looked and saw more chaps and was like duh dork you should of noticed it before...but damn i hadnt expected all that and I gotta tel it it was AWSOME...sooo loved it, uniques and full of battle of wills angst lemony goodness and all that..it was great!
person FanFic Addict
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to give you a little howdy do and tell tha that I realy enjoy this story!
So I hope you aren't giving up on it! I would really like for you to continue!

Please keep going!

FanFic addict,

K.T.
person diana
schedule July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hay when are you going to update this great story of yours?
person diana
schedule July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story