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for A Plan Gone Astray

by blueangel

person kmplease
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow his true form, thats some good writing, keep gong, i love stories when kagome is strong like she is in the anime
person Metis
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um, how did we jump from the scene in Chap 1 to this one?
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person arryelle
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was by far one of the best fanfics ever plz update soon if theat wasnt the last cahpter if it was can u email me and tell me

thanks arry
person sesshouchick
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is the first K/S fic I've read were Kag and Sess are doing it but his in his true form that was new and very well written I hope you continue writing this fic It's very very good
person Megan Consoer
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters.
person Anolea
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! That was one of the best stories yet! I love the way you write. And don't you dare add another chapter. It doesn't need one no matter how much those other dickheads want it. Your story is truly complete
person Melissa
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well that puts a whole new meaning on the "little death!"
person R.D.A.
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say that I really enjoyed that! I actually shrieked and threw the laptop off my lap when he did you-know-what in his full demon form. I just love the slight hint of beastiality... ::is a sick little girl:: anyway that was very unique, I must say... lol!
person Hikari-T3nshi
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow..I love this story! I'm so mad for not finding this chapter earlier.