rate_review Reviews

No real comments. Just two words: Update soon!

I ahve been waiting for you to update!I was beginning to wonder if you ever would! I can't wait to read the rest!!!

that was great!!! i love this fic! poor rin .... but at lest sesshy didnt forget about his 'male duties' i take it the next chapter will be the last? what ever happend to kouga? i was wondering why you made kagome a weak human and not a miko? kikyo died painfuly *dose happy dance* i have to go now. ja ne!

You updated ^_^. I so happy you did. You're write the next chapter will be intense and hope long. Update soon.

Yes!! Another chapter!! And yet... you left off at a cliffhanger. =_= meanie. The only thing that bothered me was the lack of description of Sango when she finally appeared. You seemed to rush right over her. She's helping him? Surely she's being controlled or threatened. What are her thoughts as she watches the beginning of her friends' destruction? This is what was passing through my head at the time. Keep updating!!

This is an exceptionally well written story. It flows well and the characterization and creativity involved in the setting and developement is excellent. I would love for you to finish this (at your own pace of course b/c it is truly well done and good things should not be rushed). I would really, really love for you to write a Rin and Sesshoumaru AU fan fiction b/c after Kagome and Inu Yasha, they are the focus when I read this. I liked what you did with Sango and Miroku but they didn't grab me as much but this is a personal preference. I love your subtle (and not so subtle) spurts of humor and I don't mind the story b/coming more intense and dark. Naraku should be horrid to bring out the best in all the major players.



keep up the good work!!

I LOVE this story!!! it's so cool you need to update plz!!! Ja ne ^_^

Inuyashasgurl008

It's so great to see another chapter! There wasn't a whole lot of plot development in this one, but it did give us another fix. I know it's hard to do extra writting like this very often and I'm happy that you found the time! As always I can't wait for the next chapter, however long the wait.

Great story with an interesting premis. Please keep going?

I hope that Kagome's feelings does not come to past. Update soon.