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for Human Compensation

by WhisperingMoon

person JuneBug
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!!!!!!! Awsome chapter...wait...AWSOME story....can't wait for chapter 24 hehe ^_^
Write away and produce more chapters PLEASE.....WHAT HAPPENED TO SANGO? Is she okay? Is she dead?
TELL ME!!!!!!!! What about Inu and Kagome?
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I know I already sent in a review, but that was before I registered and got an account or something like that. I really enjoyed your story! I hope you do update soon. The story has a really nice flow to it, it's great! *squeezes Tasuki*
TK: Can't breath!
RS: I'm not letting go until you turn that really interesting blue color. *turned to a blue color* *lets go*
RS: Hah! I win! *throws hands in the air in victory*
Well, great story! Sorry, I'm just totally random! I hope you check out my two stories. Called Dream Wonderland and Are You Ready? Inu-Yasha and Fushigi Yuugi.
person Keysha
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!!! I hope Sango and Miroku are okay...I love them together!! Sesshomaru taunts Inu-chan for tell ell of it, and it pisses Inu off every time!! Please update more soon...Kagome needs to get with Inu-chan, but it seems like every time she wants to, something terrible happens. I'm waiting for the day all the bad stuff ends. I bet this was Kikyo and Naraku's doing!
person JuneBug
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chp. 22 That was awsome....I loved it...When will Inuyasha and Kagome finally get the chance to mate...And are Sango and Miroku okay?
person Ronda
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good i l i love your story! hope you update sooner. well, gb for now.
person hakuryuu
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what an awesome story!!! I really like what you've done with it and I think you should continue with it if at all possible... ;) keep going!
person JuneBug2089
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story.I can't wait to see how it turns out to be.I hope that Inuyasha and Kagome finally get their problems straightened out.

^_^ JuneBug
person Nhyemia
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*^-^* Thanks so much for mentioning me in your story, that was so sweet ! And it made me really happy. It has inspired me to do a long review even though I'm dead tired. I try to review all the stories I read even if I don't feel like leaving a long review so the default is 'great story'. ::giggles:: In your case it's so true. You have a wonderful story wriiten out and I always check to see if it's updated when I turn on the computer. I know I didn't comment from the last chapter but When I read it agian, I laughed when Kagome called Sesshaumaru an arrogant dog. He is, but hes also one gorgeous mutt! Chapter 21 was just as good and I can't wait to see how Kagome reacts when she wakes up to find Inuyasha in her bed. Its either going to be way hot or ' Damnit Inuyasha!!What the Hell are you doing in here?' Anyhow, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hurry and update.

.^_^. Nhyemia
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a damn good story!!! Sesshomaru's such an elegant bastard..I loved him on the show and I love him here!! Each chappie gets better than the last...please update more soon!! You're a very good writer.

I cracked up when Inu told Kagoma about youkai tails....and what Shippo was probably doing!!!

person BSASAMI
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT READING MATERIAL. IT KEEPS ME WANTING MORE. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!