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by WhisperingMoon

person Dictator of Pancakes
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
- falls off chair- nuuu!! must....finish...- dies- -stands up and bows- Thats it for the dramatics come back mon-Fri at 4 1/2 Tm to see more. muwhahaha enough coffee for me. I love it i'm addicted - adds to list- Update!! - runs in circles-
person LadyOfInuyasha
schedule May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My god that was so good! come home everyday from school to see if you have updated yet. When are you going to put in Kagome and Inuyasha mating? Just curious, well, g2g.keep wrting
person Keysha
schedule May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ROCK ON!!! Kagome earned Sesshomaru's respect..not an easy task. I am glad Sango is okay. So, you live in TN? SO do I: Memphis, as a matter of fact. Please update more soon...I love this story!! It's well thought out, and the plot line is incredible!
schedule May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy Sango lived! I figured you wouldn't kill her, but I'm so happy she'ive!ive!!!! She's my second favorite character, right after Kouga. I like em all, but Kouga and Sango are my two favs. I really enjoyed your story and I hope you continue to update as soon as possible... I wish I could update as soon as possible...*sigh*
person Brandy
schedule May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! great fanfic! I cant wait until the next chapter . please keep writing, for the sake of us less talented people with crappy imaginations and couldnt write a good fanfic if their lives depended on it,(like me T_T )
person JuneBug
schedule May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWW....Sesshomoru is being nice....that is a laugh...it is nearly impossible.....i like it...UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
Im really into your story....i still wanna know when Inu and Kagome will finally mate....!!!!
JuneBug
person Nhyemia
schedule May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 23 & 24 were really great. ^-^ I loved the way you dedicated them to Miroku and Sango as they don't get a lot of attention. Our monk was a tad out of character, but I like it when men get a little ((just a little)) aggresive. Keep up the writting and try to update soon. I'm looking forward to reading more about Miroku and his exterminator, not to mention Inuyasha and Sesshaumaru.

Tornados, huh? I hope all of your friends and family are ok. My part of florida dosent't seem to get many, though hurricans are a big problem. I won't be reviewing so much though. I'm moving so its a little hectic.

.^_^. Nhyemia
person JuneBug
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME.....*whew* thank goodness Sango is still alive...but for how long? Is Naraku ever gonna die? hehe ^_^
Keep writing......
person hakuryuu
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still awesome!!! I really love what you've done with them!!! And, I don't mean to be bossy but I do like this MiroSan side story you have going... ^^- anyway please inueinue!
person Shinoku
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is gwtting good