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for Human Compensation

by WhisperingMoon

person Bsasami
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please have me on your list. Its great having you back. I hope everything is O.k. I think Rin is going to be in trouble!!! I say.
person kagome-reborn
schedule June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
haha, lov your story, don't know bout kag, but i would of been sneaking back into the car, peeling the roof back on . prayin to kami and lighting to start the car.... hehe
person BloodBudan
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oOo.....very well writen....Keep it up....i can't wait till the next chapter

~Blood Budan~
person BloodBudan
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sweet....can't wait till the next chapter.......Write more!!!!!!
BloodBudan
person Nhyemia
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Kami,

Its been so long sence the last time I got to read your story. I'm so glad I finally got my aol back. I read all four of you mate chapters and each was better then the last. Your sex scenes have gotten hotter and your wriiten is still great if not better then when you first put up the story. That last chapter with Inuyasha having cramps has me chuckling still as I write this.

Please keep up the great writting!! I want to read more!!

.^_^.Nhyemia
person hakuryuu
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great as usual!!! ^^ I wanna know what has tos to Kagome!! and Sango ;) ^^
person BloodBudan
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!! what happened to Kagome? i can't waithtill the next chapter comes out....WRITE QUICKLY!!!!!
BloodBudan
person christine
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really great!!!I cant wait for more!!!
person Keysha
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa what's happening to Kagome? I am sorry I haven't reveiwed the last few chappies, but this story continues to rock!! I liked it that she and Inu-chan finally became mates, and she's feeling a taste of his strength. I bet it's Naraku harming her now...please update soon!! That cliffie was just mean!!
person JuneBug
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GREAT.....i really like this story.....i hope you update soon
JuneBug