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October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, after the review I left for "The Importance of Being (...)" I think I'm all tuckered out to churn another long and detailed one for this! Suffice to say, your work is some kind of addicting. I liked this - a little better paced, still kind of rushed but so action-packed! My only issue was that the girls didn't get to kick much ass here, but that was fixed with the last few chapters (and it's more personal taste anyway!)
Great job!
Great job!
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!! It was just so incredible. The story line was awesome and kept me reading, the characters were rendered wonderfully. I read the whole thing in a couple of days. I just love the way you write! Every story I have read by you has left me wanting more.
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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YOU HAD ME IN TEARS AT THE END!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was such a good story, but i shouldnt have read it. it's now 2:30 am and i have a 1,000 word paper due at 10 am so i had better get back to my rough draft.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, if I don't say so myself! Forty-five chapters- what an amazing accomplishment. Not many authors can stay with one story for a year, even a few months! I congratulate you with that, lol! In any case, I must admit that you have an unique, intriguing way with words that had me begging for more at the end of each chapter. The moods of the many different relationships (Love, Brotherly, Friendly ect...) were set so perfectly that I was beginning to think that was how the manga, and the anime, should have gone (no matter the fact that it was set in modern times rather than in Fuedal Japan.) When I was reading chapters forty through forty-five, I was about ready to cry. After all that had happened to the characters, they were going to end up forgetting it all in the next life.
But you surprised me (This entire story was full of surprises). They ended up getting together, ended up returning to their old, normal, lovable selves, and I ended up a very, very happy girl, lol! Naraku and Kikyou were the perfect enemies. Though Kikyou was a true bitch, I never harbored any real hatred for the sick, twisted girl. She was only a pawn in Naraku's sick game, as Sango became towards the end of the story. I would normally tell the author to update as soon as they possibly could, but that wouldn't make much sense here, would it? The story is finished, with a wonderful ending at that. I -will- tell you to keep on writing, though, because any InuYasha story you happen to put out, I will definitely read it.
Wonderfully done! You certainly deserve my gratitude and applauding hands for allowing me to read such an intriguing, well-put-together story that had such an interesting plot. I wish you good luck with future stories...
Chow for now,
Liz (Bethy-kun)
But you surprised me (This entire story was full of surprises). They ended up getting together, ended up returning to their old, normal, lovable selves, and I ended up a very, very happy girl, lol! Naraku and Kikyou were the perfect enemies. Though Kikyou was a true bitch, I never harbored any real hatred for the sick, twisted girl. She was only a pawn in Naraku's sick game, as Sango became towards the end of the story. I would normally tell the author to update as soon as they possibly could, but that wouldn't make much sense here, would it? The story is finished, with a wonderful ending at that. I -will- tell you to keep on writing, though, because any InuYasha story you happen to put out, I will definitely read it.
Wonderfully done! You certainly deserve my gratitude and applauding hands for allowing me to read such an intriguing, well-put-together story that had such an interesting plot. I wish you good luck with future stories...
Chow for now,
Liz (Bethy-kun)
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this has to be one of the best fics ive read...
:) i love it!
:) i love it!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I DEMAND A SEQUEL!! I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU SAY THERE IS GOING TO BE ONE OR ELESE!!!!!!! Wow, that's like the first threat I have ever given to a writer before, feel honored^__~ OMG that was horrible and great and nerve wracking and nauseating and exciting MY GOD! *twitches* That was a friggin awesome ending, I was going to die when... just about everyone died *heh* But the ending was so creative, I never thought their memories would come back when they kissed, well except for shippo, but he didn't have anyone to kiss...*sigh* Please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please oh please*on knees begging now^^* write a sequel, it would have A LOT of potential in my opinion! Although I must admit, I am somewhat satisfied, but there's still that gaping hole of what is to come... oh I hope you do write a sequel!!!
~A Loyal Reader~
~A Loyal Reader~
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this.was.so...............gooooooooooooooood! it made me cry, made me happy, and made me sad totally how i like to read a good story this is a master peice and u r another of my fav authoresses im gonna put this in my favs!!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mother of God. Sweet release. This is the best story ever. I hope that when Scars finishes, that it will merely tie, not surpass this story. I can not praise this story enough.
I cant.
I cant.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Genius! Sheer Genius!! I loved the story.. You have to write an epilogue! This was some of the best writing I have read in a long time, no joke. I loved reading this story and was a little peeved when you killed just about EVERYBODY off but then you fixed it, so you are forgiven. I really look forward to your future stories.