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for Living In A Moment

by ldkelly

person dith
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i think there should be a sequle and i love this story a lot and for a moment i thought he would be brought out in a cascet
person Elvia
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank god! LOL I was crying through this whole story! I don't think I even blinked while I was reading it. You have got to make a sequel! No sappy epilogue will do, it has to be a full sequel with lots and lots of babies for Inuyasha and Kagome! I feel so much better now... I love happy endings! Thanks so much for making this, the prequel left me really depressed but this has me back to my normal self now. I hope to see the sequel up soon. Oh and if you take my advice as far as the lots and lots of babies... just as a hint... my 2 year old daughters name is Serenity Alexis! Just a suggestion LOL!


~Elvia
person Keysha
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*crying tears of joy* Oh, if only that had worked out for my friend! That was sa bea beautfiul ending....an epilogue would be great! This story is great, and so are you!! Epilogue soon, please!
person WhisperingMoon
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You had me thinking that was the end of the first story. I had no idea you were going to write a second part'm s'm so happy! This was one was great! I can't imagine Sesshoumaru being so nice, you really made him very sweet, far from the character that he usually is, but I loved it! Yeah! I'm so happy they got back together! I think you should write an epilogue. This story is perfect like it is, but sometimes when people stretch things out, they kind of loose their charm, you know? You are a great writer!
person Miche¦ :
schedule December 18, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, it breaks your heart. You've done a wonderful job, congradulations.