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for Travelin' Soldier

by ldkelly

person í keep falling
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i know you wrote a sequel and this story is finished and not new .. but i just had to review. i think, no in know .. that this is the first story i cried about! oh gosh .. it´s so fantastically written and so sad! i just had to tell you, hell i cried!!
so now i´m going to read the sequel .. hopefully it will be as perfect as this one
person Elle435
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not much to say... this is just beautiful. *sniffle*
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gods, that was depressing, but beautiful! I really don't have the words to express how this made me feel.
person MyOwnHappyEnding (not logged on)
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an emotional rollercoaster and I bow down to worship you! I have never cried that hard before. Can't wait to read the next story, so this will be cut short.
person drake220
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
never heard the song (hate country music) but i knew the minute i read the blurb what would happen. so i tried to withstand the urge and not read it. i wasn't in the mood to cry, you understand. but i couldn't help myself. so i read it and i cried. i hate crying but i loved this fic. the worst was when she thought inu was back and he wasn't. i was so angry at you!! i wailed.......bravo for this great fic. deserves every award it got
person drake220
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
never heard the song (hate country music) but ew tew the minute i read the blurb what would happen. so i tried to withstand the urge and not read it. i wasn't in the mood to cry, you understand. but i couldn't help myself. so i read it and i cried. i hate crying but i loved this fic. the worst was when she thought inu was back and he wasn't. i was so angry at you!! i wailed.......bravo for this great fic. deserves every award it got
person mother of a fallen private
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was sent to me from my sons commanding officer
around last month


now it has befallen me to write this reveiw because i was the one that found this story
i read this as a soldier and cried
i read this with my sgt and we creid
he read this to his co who was said to have cried
we read this to the barracks and alot of them cried
i forward this to my mother and she cried twice over
once for her husband who in the navy during the first gulf war
she is gratful to have him by her side to cry with her
and once for me who is in the army at this time
she forwarded this to alot of my friends who were told to read it with their parents
i was told by some of my friend who got in touch with my mother that they and their parents cried
my mother also forwarded this to my grandmother whom upon reading this broke down and d
d
uncontrollibly in the memory of my later grandfather who took part in the Vietnam conflict
it was said to me that my grandmother as soon as she gained controll of herself again
forwarded this to her friends and the rest of my distant family
it came to me that a dear friend of my grandmother's, the COLONEL, died last tuesday
he also fought in Vietnam

as you can see this story has brought many friend, family, and loved ones to tears
and probably a small few even had a clue that it as anything to do with anime at all
but through out my family many of us are or have been in one service or another
along those lines not one of us has died in any war as of yet
and i plan to make sure that i am not the firsts i s i have been called to the service of my country to fight in iraq in the name of peace
now if i had started this circle before Sakura Con 2003 you would have had alot more awards
even a few that would have been nationally respected
but alas i didnt get into fanfics til early this summer
but all in all this was a good story that made some good people cry for something worth beleiving in
freedom


my son the private died last month
this was the last piece of writing that my son did
when i read it i knew what it was for
he was right this story was a tearjerker
read and writing this brings me tears
but as this was one of the last things my son wrote
i see it as my privlege to post this for him to insure his memory
he died in a mortar attack in bagdad while helping to protect the peace
i sit here next to his father for support
we hope this post does not fall on deaf ears
in loving memory of our son
we hope he rests in peace for the peace that he died to protect
person bluerose12132002
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodnesIt wIt was great I loved it! I was crying when they said Inuyasha die and Kagome was crying. You were right it is a tear-jerker.LOVE IT!! ^.^
person OutlawsLady
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...My!!!! You have turned me into a bawling mess!!!! Now I must dry my tears, blow my nose and continue on with the journey....
person Ayame
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well. what can be said..... WoW
Really you are a great author, this fic was really incredible, filled whith feeling. all this talent you posses should actually be put onto better use.