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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MAKE 'EM SCREW LIKE BUNNIES!!! (and maybe have kids like bunnies too!)
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May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story.....it was pretty intense, but it was still good....i hope it's not quite finished....what happened to Sango,Miroku, and Shippou? did they find a place to stay the night of the strom? ^_^
JuneBug
JuneBug
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May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
holy....shit.....i'm happy in the pants now....
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May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MMOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MROE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
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May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
such an awesome story!! ^^ I like! I really like your writing style... as for ideas (not like you need any ;)) I think that you could do more with the beach... and maybe Miro/San stuff... but whatever! it's great!
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May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice story! and i thought it was just fine its one of the few that ive read that ive liked well anyway i think that it would be a good idea to continue it! also i think it would be hilarious if mirouku or even shippo just so happened to stumble upon your two love birds! LOL! well anyway gotta go
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T.Y.
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T.Y.
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May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! This chapter is sooo goood!!!
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May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh that was such a sweet chapter! Can't wait to read the next one.
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May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoo HOo! Ch.3 Was hot!! I think I need some water.
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May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not really a Kikyo fan even though I feel sorry about what happened to her. THe chapter was well-written. hehe