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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!bravo
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cute
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
u know how much i hate it when i find a story with a good description, thats supposed 2 b a lemon, and 2 find out theres no lemon? that ticks me off. well, if your ever going 2 update this story, plz do it soon! till next time, ja ne!
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GET ON WITH IT!!!!!!!!! that is an awsmoe story from what i have read so far...i can't wait to see what the next chapter brings...hehe ^_^
JuneBug
JuneBug
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April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey layne, wow this is so good...i await the next chapter even tho i know what it is...^.^
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April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wowy wow wow!!!! I likey!! It's promising!!! Keep on keepin' on!!! ^_~
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April 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was a great start for this fic keep up the great work
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April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
overyvery passionate, my friend, I like, I like. ^_^. A few typos need to be fixed, but who cares It was a great start. I'm waiting for the next chapter, please.