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for Deal With the Demon Lord

by Kai19

person diana
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you should really continue this story its really good!!!!!!!!!!!!
please write more!
person No One Knows
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have got to do more lemons with these 3!!! This story is so awesome!!
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GODAS SAS SAS SOOOOOOOO FUCKING AWESOME!!!!! Continue! Continue!! Continue!!!
person Sephie
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh :-D I loved it! You have to continue this! Even if it is just a sequel! You have soooo much material to work with you just have to ! Ohhhh Please please please oh merciful fanfic writer! Please humor your pathetic and worthless fan, by writing more.
:-D Thank you :) drop me a note if you do decide to write more. I definatly need to read it when you do.
person blade
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i say u contiue i thought it was an awesome idea to do that so please please contiue ^_^
person Sarah
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was....interesting...lol. When I saw the summary I thought it would be a love triangle where she was wite the then went to the other. Not expected but you wrote it well. Nice story.
person shina schatten
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is good, please continue.... love to see more SHARING between them. ja ne
person Kurai
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read it again ... and I really do think you should write a bit more on what happens when they wake up ... there's so much possibilities.. I'd love is if you write just a bit more ...
person michelle
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a really cool story
i think you should really continue it!
or make a sequel to it!
hope u make another story! sto stories are awesome!
Ja ne
person Kurai
schedule June 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...................................*speechless*.............................
that was priceless really .... best lemon i've ever read .......
about the first PWP so far I actually liked ........................