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for Deal With the Demon Lord

by Kai19

person Neko Metallium
schedule April 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII!!!!!^-^ Very well written, I must say. One of the better lemons I've read. Dang, Kagome is so friggin lucky!
Two impossibly hot youkai all to herself. Grrr.....anyway, continue!>^.^<
person ennovymoon
schedule April 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was very different but...I LOVED IT, UPDATE SOON!!!!
person Dark Shadowa Aka Shade
schedule April 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i lovis fis fic i think it ranks right up their with blood red eyes. this is something i have thought about writing but didn't know how to do.


CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person applejacks
schedule April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh the possibilities. this makes for an interesting raed, please continue and update soon.
person anomynous
schedule April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You just keep us coming back for more. Your stories are absolutely hot and this one was just sweltering. Please, keep your wonderful stories working their magic...you're completely amazing!
person Keysha
schedule April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHOA!!!! That was hotter than the fires of hell!! I loved that story a great deal, and you did a superb job of portng tng the threesome!!! I'd love to have two lovers...one a demon, the other a half-demon. Two men, two big thingees, too much fun!! You are an awesome writer, and this was well done!!
person MJ
schedule April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Continue!!!
person applejacks
schedule April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
kudos to kagome for being so open minded about the whole thing. excellent lemon, but what's gonna happen when the others find out?
person Diane
schedule April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've read all the Inuyasha fics you have up on AFF & I really like them all. PLEASE continue this fic if at all possible, I really want to find out what happens next.
person jenifa
schedule April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a fun read, I think the story is good as is, no additions necessary. But please, feel free to write more fics, I don't mind. ^__^