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for Childish Games

by Utsukushi

person Inulova69
schedule June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
FINISH your story you have to it is the best y ofy of Inuyasha and Kagome!! Oh and you spelled SOUTA wrong you spelled it sota its not right Souta needs rights to!!
LOVED YOUR STORY ttfn!!
person JuneBug2089
schedule May 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!!! Don't let Hojo get Kagome again....what I don't understand is did Hojo rape Kagome in the alley or before that?
Oh well......WRITE MORE CHAPTERS......
JuneBug
person JuneBug
schedule May 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME......very good...i especially like the cream filled ballon fight part.....i loved it.....WRITE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!!!!
person WhisperingMoon
schedule May 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the lemon. I left a longer review on fanfiction.net.
person Arashi Senjo
schedule April 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
excellent, tasteful lemon, i have no complaints. congradulations.
person \'La Rosa que no murere\'
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
;D Coolies! me likes, so I really hope ya type up some more! **grins** Inu... Yasha!!!*drools* *gapes at screen* MORE INUYASHA!!! MORE INUYA-- er... heehee! *sweat* Uh... Bye!
person J3$$
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Plz cont. soon! More lemonade plz! =D
person maggie-chan
schedule April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
keep it up! i like the story!! update soon, and email me when u do!!
~maggie-chan ^^
person nyemia
schedule April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was a great chapter, but what was with the typos?? no biggie though I got the drift^_^. I can't wait till they get home from school.
person jen
schedule April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. it's soo good. i can't wait until you write more. update soon.