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for His Woman

by Wheezambu

person Sky
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was just unexpected. I was so stuned after i read that. I loved it so how is throwing her dead body in the well going to save the world? Hopefully u'll write more but if not thats fine 2. I really enjoyed reading it tho!!
person richonyx
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I'm depressed beyond words now. Poor Kouga! Oh, the things that love makes you do...Great fic, very very dark. You are a master storyteller!
person Kai
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Kai)*holds back sob, while slightly glaring at her Media Player* You just had to play a sad song about lost love during the saddest part didn't you? (Media Player) Hey it fit deal with it. (Kai) *glares some more but continues* That was a great story I love it. It was just right only way I can put it.
Kai
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I have never cried while reading a fic EVER! But I sure as hell did with this. This was storytelling at its best AND I MEAN BEST! I usually do not read death fics, but this one caught my attention, especially when I recognized your penname as one of my reviewers. Thank you. But on to you. This was so absolutely awesome, so well written. What a wonderfully original idea. Poor Koga. That took a lot of courage. Now I want you to know that you had better add to this story with another chapter. Because I want to know how Kagome's death and being thrown into the well will effect what had happened previously. I'm a bit slow ^_~ So please, please, please do another chapter. Don't make me come and get you, cause then I'll tie you to the keyboard and won't let you out until you write another chapter, K. ^_^ And thank you again for all of your kind words and encouragements. It means a lot coming from such a talented and seasoned writer as you.
person Ash
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was some awesome writing if I've ever seen it. I'm sitting here crying in front of my computer, that was one of the most bittersweet things I've ever heard. Keep this up, you've got talent! ~Ash
person DLB
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That sucks. Good, but it still sucks.
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very original, and a different way to look at everything!!
I was so drawn into the story, the sadness, everything..
Very well written!!
person Nokomaie the Snake
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Huh, well. And the whole cycle starts over again elsewhere? Of course, my everlastingly immeadiate thought was 'Oh, Kouga, you are a cheesehead'. Sigh.