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November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude! this is so cute! ^-^
please keep updating!!
please keep updating!!
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! How can ppl not love that lime it was totally AWESOME!!! Finally they met and such great sparks too!! Plzz update soon all my other fave stories are eitehr on hold or they dont update. YOU WONT DO THAT TO ME WILL?! Yep this is one of my fav stories!!!
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!! I hate you so much this is such an awesome stry plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make Inu appear already! You put me in suspense while i was reading this story. By the way nice tast in the room. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! LIKE TOMORROW!!!! OR TODAY!!!
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG i so know where your going with this story I bet you anything that Kags is going to run itno Inu on her way there!! I cant wait till u update!!!!!!!!!
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story but i have one question whoa are you going to pair Kikyou with? I mena i dont like Kikyou very much but when somebody makes a story with her in it and shes nice then i can stomach it. I really love the sister relationship you made with Kags and KI. I hope you post chapter 3 today.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't put all the information at the begining of the story, even if they are just little facts (unless you are doing a police description).
It's more book-like and doesn't take away the "mistery" if you let them one by one in the course of the story; same thing with the past, I think it's better to reveal memories and past events piece by piece to keep the reader interested.
Just a tip...take it oave ave it.
It's more book-like and doesn't take away the "mistery" if you let them one by one in the course of the story; same thing with the past, I think it's better to reveal memories and past events piece by piece to keep the reader interested.
Just a tip...take it oave ave it.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thankfully Hojo gets whats comming to him. Love the story so far!! update soon
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omfg! youve GOTTA update!!
i have to admit i felt like stabbing
when you had Hraperape her...lol
but all is well now that Inuyasha
has come into the picture!
please update! *cry*
i have to admit i felt like stabbing
when you had Hraperape her...lol
but all is well now that Inuyasha
has come into the picture!
please update! *cry*
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's fine as long as Hojo gets his in the end that's aall that matters. I can't wait for the introduction Inuyasha in the next chapter.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The relationship between Kikyo and Kagome is pretty cool.