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for Dance With Me

by inuyashasgirl

person Zelix
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Goodie, good chapter, keep em coming and soon!
person yune-chan
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMGGGGGG!!!!! did u see that type-o in ch. 6 when u called InuYasha Natasha when kagome was talking to kikyo!?!?!?!? if u didnt i just wanted to let u no about it. thanks for listening =D and by the way ur story is great!!!!!! i love it so much i cant wait for u to update!!!!!!
person timer-Lover
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel so touch! It's been a long time since I read a good story! Keep it up! Update more often because this is the first time I read it and I haven't been on AFF since I have a formal to get ready for 2morrow! GREAT WORK!
person Zelix (not logged on)
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic, i simply just love it... and yes, it would be very interesting if she said yes about being the model.
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
man, this story ROCKS!!!!
PLEASE continue it!
this story is, like, my FAVE!
Yes, Kagome should let InuYasha draw her naked!
And when is she gonna tell him why she & Hojo broke up?
and when are we gonna meet sango?
(yes, yes, i know - so many questions! I'm can be extremely curious and inquisitive at times.
I'm sorry. It's one of my many flaws.)
person Becky
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, This is really cool so far! I just kinda wish Inuyasha could be a dancer, too. Inu in tights . . . mmmm . . .
I have one note: Manhattan is in New York City, so saying that Kagome isn't from Manhattan when she grew up in New York is a little . . . you get me? But that's really the only flaw I can see. Good work!
person sizzlinghotcat
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story and I think she should say yes.
person Zelix
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant story from you, you are good with these and i hope you'll update soon again!
person Platinum-IceFire(Not logged in)
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for answering the question althouhg im not a Kikyo fan i realy like her in this story and her pairing is really unusual but its ok for me. PLZZZ UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!
person RavenShadow
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this so far, its sweet and romantic. I hope you get a chance to update soon!