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this is a good fic very interesting PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

wow this is a very good story so far it has passion and something else that seems to make it special please keep writting this story it is truely amazing UPDATE soon

Yeah!!!! Dirty, dirty, dirty!...I'm bad...I know (tee hee) Luv ya, Update soon!^_-

AHHH! Now I need an update! I've always liked Inu-yasha playing an artist AUs and dancing ones too.

My only piece of advice is that you work on your conversations. I got lost many times on who was talking when conversations go on for a very long time. It's ok to say every know and then; "The professor loved my drawing," Inu-yasha continued.

OR

"I'm still not sure if I'm ready," Kagome told him hesitantly, still trying to avoid his amber eyes.

This way you have a little more interaction and movement instead of them just standing there looking at eachother. If you would like a beta I would be happy to help?

Good luck on your next chapter!

okay, so i'm on chapter two right now and i thought i would leave a review. i like how you put Houjo out to be a bad guy (so to say) so many fics out there have him as a pansy little boy who can't do anything right (not that he has here either, but he has brass balls for what he did to her, i cna only say i hope INU kicks some serious ass). you have a good flow to you words and a well worked out dialougue and background story for the characters. no mind you i'm on two so i say this hesitanty, i like your kikyo character (that hurts to say). i never like kikyo and yours isn't really that bad. so yeah, props on that one. but this is really bugging me, just cuase i'm such a new york chick. you put them living in Manhattan and yet going to New York City??? uhh....manhattan is IN new york city...Juilliard is in Manhattan...rigth across from Central Park. :-/ i guess it can be a common misconception...but there are five burrows (much like the...uhh...band {their name escapes me} just put out) there is The Bronyx, Harlemn, Staten Island, Queens, and Manhatten which is where most of the commerce takes place (ie. radio city music hall, Julliard, central park) you might want to go back through and maybe make thier previous residence somewhere in Jersey, like Jersey City (kind of slummy) or Trenton....or....anywhere around there. but yeah...Manhattan IS New York City, i just thought i ought to point that out. sorry, i really mean no disrespect, i just wanted to inform you to that little quark. i shall continue on reading to see how it comes out. i really like the story.

okay, so it's two AM and i'm gonna call it a night on chapter 7. you really have a lot of great description in the story...so much i can see it being acted out, which is great. dont' listen to people who say that description bogs down a story...cause it doesn't. i still love your kikyo character and you Kagome character is a real sweetie. Inu is a littel soft for my liking but you have a believeable character, which is what counts. great story so far...very well put together and thought out. you have intresting restruants picked out with very good interaction, as if they were true places in the city to look for. (oh, and an annotation on my last note, which i feel like a jackass for, Harelmn is not a borrow, Brooklyn is...i was looking at the following chapter and realized i have family in Brooklyn and was wondering how i managed to leave that out. baka me.) ANYWAY, great story and keep up with it.

Thank you for finally updating! I was starting to get worried since i haven't heard from you for a while... good thing you're back though, since i'm all eager for more!

Oh yeah, by the way: Your fanfiction "Loving my enemy" is missing a chapter and some of your one-shots have also been cut and are not whole anymore, i suffered the same when this site crashed a year ago or so... i just thought you should know, see ya!

great new ch. By the way are you gona update your other stories they also are good.

I sooo losve this story..its really good.I hope u get to write more soon because this is a best-seller.Its such a goood story i love the postion that you put Inuysha and Kagome in its really cute....

You must update as soon as possible! I love this story-line. Your so good at writing!^_^ I'll be waiting for the next installment. In the mean time I'll go check out your other cool fanfics!