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oooo... interestin

i want this fic to be inuyasha/Sesshomaru and naraku/miroku please make this fic be a inuyasha/Sesshomaru and naraku/miroku
i can't wait for the next chapter

hey this is really good i liked to say the least

pretty good. your spellings not great but you have a great story line. keep up the good work!

Okay Okay, I got to know what Naraku does with Miroku! You got my attention! Please write another chapter!

i love it! now keep writing! I have to see what happens with naraku and miroku! (lemon fan)

Uh oh... I don't know whether to wonder what happens next or feel to sorr for miroku to care! UPDATE!

I really like this fic. Please update anyway even if u dont get as many reviews as you wanted. You should write because u want to tell a story, not because of reviews! Anyway, please update the fic. I really want to know what happens to Miroku!

Ok, real criticism. Well, I like the basis of your story, however, the fow of your story seems a bit choppy. Try to make it smoother. At certain points, I think near the very beginning of this chapter, you have a couple of pelling errors. I would recommend reading through the first few passages and correcting them. Also, it seems a bit odd that Miroku, who is trying to be defend himself from further hurt would so easily trust a stranger, even if the stranger is kind. But the basic premise of your story is quite good. Update soon and please keep the pairing Inuyasha/Miroku, even though I am guessing and has already happened with Inuyasha, there will be rape scenes for which, obviously, the pairing will be different. But still try to stick to Inuyasha/Miroku as your pairing.

itwas very interesting bufeelfeel bad for miroku