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for Benifits of plight

by Cri

person RedShadows
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! :)
person crystaladept
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Slight interuption. Great story, I must say, but you spelled a word wrong at the end of chapter 5. When Sess called InuYasha "kabito", I believe the word you're looking for is "koibito", meaning "lover". Otherwise, I love the story. Please update soon.
person foxykittykat
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When are you gonna update? I wanna know what happens to Inuyasha. Please don't abandon this story.
person foxykittykat
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
still great! mabey you should split each chapter between miroku/naraku and sesshomaru/inuyasha so we know what happens to both of them. longer chapters please.

p.s. i like sesshomaru/inuyasha but that's my opinion
person foxykittykat
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! update really soon! hey can you check out my challenge (inuyasha/sesshomaru/kouga challenge) andlet me know what you think. i hope you might consider accepting it. update!
person foxykittykat
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry i mean foxy_kitty_kat2000@yahoo.com my bad. update soon!
person foxy_kitty_kat2000
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so sesshomaru's in love with inuyasha too? you have to update soon! hey what if sesshomaru tried to convince inuyasha to stay with him and forget about miroku? just a suggestion. update soon!
person kyou
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person MorbidSparkles
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story, i need more nc-17 though
person carol
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the story but i think you should every now and then go back to sesshomaru and inuyasha to let everyone in on whats been going on with them while what's happening to miroku. one more thing: i think your chapters should be a little longer.