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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!! I really like it so far.....
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon. I think I like it....
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep writting i love you first one i wanna no what happens next.
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far this is good, update soon.
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story. i really hope u want too update. Is Rin older or still a kid? And if u write anew chapter try for mon mon (with an older Rin...no minor lemons plz)
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have my FULL attention. I would very much like to see more of this story written - I am very interested as to where you will take it as far as plot and character developement. So far, so good....please continue to write.