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for Rin's Wish

by ShatteredHearts

person SwtLilRin
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job upadate soon!!!
person animegirl007
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that that's not the bitch and her father's baby...... just tell me I'm guessing wrong.........I'm so pissing at the at bitch Luna right now....I don't know what to do....update soon please.....
person lady kaboos
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait till the next chapter. The suspence of it all. I am really into the story, the story line is so good.^_^
person SwtLilRin
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon plz i want to know what happens
person daygonna
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is turning into such a sad fic! plz get rid of Luna and (forgive me) her baby...or make it so that it isnt Sesshomaru's...yeah she put an illusion spell or something on the baby and its really a guards or her dads (incest, i know but u hinted her dad was a sicko). Plz Plz...i feel soo sry for Rin....if Rin forgives Sess dont make it one of those kinda things where she acts so forgiving its ike he gets an 'outta jail' free card. THANX for the 2 chapters in a row. Update soon...dont leave this story yet to write another. Thank you
person allie
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this one is just as good as the rest of your work and i can't whate till your next chapter
person Cassie
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good fic, can't wait to read chapter 8. I want to see if Sesshomaru will fight off that spell that BITCH put on him. He doesn't deserve a crazy bitch like her. He is better off with Rin she loves him and he loves her. They make the perfect couple.
Please hurry and update don't keep your fans waiting.
person daygonna
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
jeez, this is turning out so great! plz plz update. i feel so bad for Rin. Try not to keep us waiting
person animegirl007
schedule November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Girl!!!!!you better have Rin and Sesshomaru back together and soon.......( My heart is breaking two..and my death will be on your head!!!!!!!!) :) ..........I can't wait for more ....POOR RIN!!!!!!.....I WANT LUNA DEAD.........UPDATE SOON
person anigamer
schedule November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a twist I didn't see comming. the story is getting really good. I really wonder what is going to happen. Please update. I can't wait.