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for The Monk and the Youkai Women

by Wheezambu

person Ymanetta
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Girl that story was just too hot. And the stuff you made Miroku say just fit him to the T well I thought he would change his attitude in the middle of a lusty fuck like that. Girl Hot shit.
person Candide Avedo
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Who hoo, very intense, definitely a great chappie, no wonder it was in the NC 17 section! LOL. Ah, well, I loved all of the scenes, definitely discriptive. Thanks for updating!
person Leachan
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was good! I thougt wat was funny too.
One of the best One Shots, I have ever read.
And that is saying alot..

~:~
person kittyonnails
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think it was a good idea to post this one as a seprate story, it makes a totally fun one-shot, or could even be a seprate tangent. (as if you don't have enought of those) Either way, I really like Miroku in this. Neat stuff!
person richonyx
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hot to death. Not even funny--HOT TO FRIGGIN DEATH. I'm wishing I had been born a man...a houshi with violet eyes and a wandering hand... Dang...